What should I write about in my college essay?

I’m starting to brainstorm for my college essay, but honestly, I feel a little lost. I've heard that the topic matters as much as how you write it, but I don’t really know what kinds of subjects the admissions teams actually want to see.

I don’t have a super dramatic story, but I do have things that are important to me, like volunteering at my local animal shelter and playing in the school orchestra. I’m not sure if these are too common or if it’s more about the way I present them. Should I be focusing on a specific moment or more on my growth over time?

If anyone has advice on how to approach the essay topic or examples of what worked for them, I’d really appreciate the help. This is the part of my application I’m most nervous about! Thanks!
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Camille Luong
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Feeling lost when you start your college essay is extremely common, so you're definitely not alone! The truth is, the best college essay topics don’t necessarily have to be dramatic, once-in-a-lifetime events. Admissions officers are interested in who you are, how you think, and what matters to you—your topic is really just the way you deliver that story.

Your experiences volunteering and playing in the orchestra are great starting points. What makes them stand out isn't necessarily the activity itself (since lots of people volunteer or play an instrument) but how these experiences have impacted you, or a unique angle you can offer. For example, imagine diving into a very specific moment: the first time you helped save an injured animal, or the nerves before your first orchestra solo.

Let’s say you choose the animal shelter. Instead of writing broadly about volunteering, zoom in on a particular event—a moment when you were challenged, surprised, or changed your perspective. Did you find yourself caring for a difficult pet and in the process, learn patience or empathy? Or maybe there was a time you advocated for better conditions, finding your voice as a leader. Focusing on a single moment and reflecting on what you learned offers a much more compelling story than simply listing your involvement over time.

Similarly, if you write about orchestra, think beyond just practicing or performing. Maybe you had to bridge a disagreement between section members, or you learned something about yourself while teaching a new student. For example, one student wrote a memorable essay about the subtle, overlooked role of tuning the orchestra—drawing a parallel between that and how she brings harmony to her friend group.

Ultimately, admissions teams want to see authenticity and uniqueness. Choose something meaningful to you, pick out a moment or experience that shaped your character or thinking, and reflect on why it still matters. Show how that experience fits into the larger story of who you are and what you value.

Don’t be afraid to focus on smaller, everyday experiences if they reveal something personal or unique about you. Sometimes, the most ordinary moments make for extraordinary essays when you dig deep into personal details and honest reflection.
Camille Luong
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Stanford University, BAH in Urban Studies
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