Camille Luong
5.0(15 reviews)
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Camille Luong
5.0(15 reviews)
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About
Hi, I'm Camille! I graduated from Stanford University with a B.A. (Honors) in Urban Studies and have worked 1-1 with dozens of students on the college application process for the past 6 years. At Stanford I minored in Creative Writing, where I routinely participated in writing workshops -- reading my classmates short stories and pieces, providing line-by-line feedback, and writing out "feedback letters" where I explained in detail what was and was not working. I was also a Writing Tutor at the Stanford Hume Writing Center, where I did the same kind of writing feedback but for academic essays.

I also specialize in helping students whose first language is *not* English, having tutored students from across the globe in writing specifically.

College applications can be incredibly challenging. I'm here to help. I'm excited to work with you on your essays and overall application!
New York City
6 years of experience
Vietnamese | Chinese
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Stanford University – BA | Urban Studies with a double-minor in Creative Writing and Modern Languages
How I work
When giving feedback for your essays, I'll focus on the quality of your line-by-line prose and creativity, but also provide feedback on the overarching structure and narrative, and whether it's actually answering the prompt or conveying the message/takeaway that you want to convey. My feedback is a combination of clarification questions about your emotions and experiences, structural analysis of how your essay is flowing and how it ought to flow, and suggestions to ensure that your essay is not only effective and clear, but also creative, compelling, and enticing to readers. I also do advising sessions, where we talk through these revisions real-time and really dive deep into your experiences and feelings -- so we can really bring those out creatively in your essays.
I’ve helped students get accepted to…
Amherst College
Boston University
Brandeis University
Brown University
California Institute of Technology
Columbia University
Cornell University
Dartmouth College
Duke University
Florida State University
George Washington University
Harvard University
New York University
Princeton University
Rice University
Stanford University
Swarthmore College
University of California, Berkeley
University of California, Los Angeles
University of Florida
University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill
University of Notre Dame
University of Pennsylvania
University of South Florida
University of Texas at Austin
Yale University
Services
Essay Review
Full Essay Feedback
$10 + 15¢ per word
Select this option if you are in the early or initial drafts of your essay and would like feedback and polishing based on the prompt and your background. I will provide comments throughout the essay and an overall assessment. Note: this is only valid for one essay draft, and second drafts will require another purchase.
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Advising Sessions
Overall Strategy Consultation
$80 | 60 min
Select this option if you would like to talk through overall application strategy, including building a school list, polishing your extracurriculars list, strategizing essay topics, or more. I can answer any and all questions regarding the college admissions process.
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Advising Packages
Starter ($90/hr, 5 hrs)
5 hours
Select this option if you'd like some help on getting started with the application process. We will strategize on goals and application narrative, personal statement topic and feedback, building a school list, and brainstorming for supplemental essays, among other things!
$450 ($90/hr)
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Season ($85/hr, 15 hrs)
15 hours
Select this option if you want a mentor to keep you on track during application season. Over the course of the application season, we will strategize your goals and application narrative, build a school list, discuss testing timelines, as well as go through various drafts of extracurricular lists, personal statements, and supplemental essays, among other things!
$1,275 ($85/hr)
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Deluxe ($75/hr, 30 hours)
30 hours
Select this option if you'd like consistent mentorship and someone to keep you on track and give you guidance for the entire season. Over the course of the application season, we will meet several times to strategize your goals and application narrative, build a school list, discuss testing timelines. We will also go through various drafts of extracurricular lists, personal statements, and supplemental essays.
$2,250 ($75/hr)
Book package
Reviews
5.0
out of 5.0
Based on 15 reviews
Carmel H
5
| 11 days ago
Sarthak T
5
| 21 days ago
Quite strong, pretty good insight as to someone reading your essay for the first time. Strong reviewer, would reccomend. For my essay, defenitely not using any AI for this.
Peichen L
5
| 3 months ago
Bhanu R
5
| 3 months ago
Very good and clear feedback.
Andy W
5
| 3 months ago
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