What is the best layout for a college application essay?
I've started brainstorming for my Common App essay but I'm getting stuck on how to actually structure it. Should I do a standard five-paragraph format, or is it better to write something more creative? A lot of people say to just write it like a story, but I'm nervous about messing up the flow or making it too informal.
Does anyone have advice or examples of essay layouts that worked for them? I want my essay to stand out, but I also don't want it to look weird or unprofessional. If you have tips for organizing the introduction, body, and conclusion, or how to transition between ideas smoothly, that would help a lot! I’m kind of overthinking all the options right now and would appreciate any guidance.
Does anyone have advice or examples of essay layouts that worked for them? I want my essay to stand out, but I also don't want it to look weird or unprofessional. If you have tips for organizing the introduction, body, and conclusion, or how to transition between ideas smoothly, that would help a lot! I’m kind of overthinking all the options right now and would appreciate any guidance.
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Camille Luong
• 4 months ago
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You’re not alone in wondering about how to lay out your Common App essay—figuring out a structure can definitely feel overwhelming with so many possibilities! The good news is that admissions officers don’t expect you to use a rigid five-paragraph format, and in fact, essays often stand out more when they break away from that formula and feel more like storytelling.
One common and effective layout is the 'narrative arc.' This means you open with an engaging scene (a specific moment from your life), then use the body paragraphs to reflect on what happened before and after, what you learned, and how you've grown. Ending with a reflection or looking forward to the future ties it all together. For example, someone might begin with a snapshot of themselves feeling out of place at their first debate tournament, recall how they struggled with self-confidence, and end by explaining how that experience fueled their drive to mentor younger students.
Another approach is the 'montage' or 'thematic' structure. This works well if you want to highlight several experiences or traits that are connected by a central theme. For instance, a student might use snapshots from cooking with their grandmother, leading a science club, and volunteering at a food pantry—all tied together by a love of bringing people together.
Regardless of layout, consider these tips:
- Start with a hook: A vivid moment, a question, or a piece of dialogue can draw the reader in right away.
- Keep each paragraph or section focused and clear. If you're telling a story, think about the "before," "during," and "after" moments.
- Use transitions: You don’t always need formal transition words. Sometimes switching between scenes or using repeated imagery or a question helps guide readers through your essay.
- End with reflection: Admissions officers want to know how your story has shaped who you are—and what kind of community member you’ll be on campus.
A quick example: One student began their essay in the middle of a busy shift at their job in a bakery. They described a small, illustrative moment (making their first perfect croissant). The essay then zoomed out to how baking helped them develop patience and attention to detail, then connected those skills to their academic interests. The last paragraph circled back to the bakery, reflecting on how small moments often reveal bigger truths.
In sum, focus on telling a story that only you could tell. The structure should feel natural to your story. Read your draft aloud—if it flows and sounds like you, you’re on the right track! If possible, share with someone you trust for feedback on whether it feels engaging or confusing. Trust your instincts, and remember that what matters most is authenticity, not sticking to a strict template.
One common and effective layout is the 'narrative arc.' This means you open with an engaging scene (a specific moment from your life), then use the body paragraphs to reflect on what happened before and after, what you learned, and how you've grown. Ending with a reflection or looking forward to the future ties it all together. For example, someone might begin with a snapshot of themselves feeling out of place at their first debate tournament, recall how they struggled with self-confidence, and end by explaining how that experience fueled their drive to mentor younger students.
Another approach is the 'montage' or 'thematic' structure. This works well if you want to highlight several experiences or traits that are connected by a central theme. For instance, a student might use snapshots from cooking with their grandmother, leading a science club, and volunteering at a food pantry—all tied together by a love of bringing people together.
Regardless of layout, consider these tips:
- Start with a hook: A vivid moment, a question, or a piece of dialogue can draw the reader in right away.
- Keep each paragraph or section focused and clear. If you're telling a story, think about the "before," "during," and "after" moments.
- Use transitions: You don’t always need formal transition words. Sometimes switching between scenes or using repeated imagery or a question helps guide readers through your essay.
- End with reflection: Admissions officers want to know how your story has shaped who you are—and what kind of community member you’ll be on campus.
A quick example: One student began their essay in the middle of a busy shift at their job in a bakery. They described a small, illustrative moment (making their first perfect croissant). The essay then zoomed out to how baking helped them develop patience and attention to detail, then connected those skills to their academic interests. The last paragraph circled back to the bakery, reflecting on how small moments often reveal bigger truths.
In sum, focus on telling a story that only you could tell. The structure should feel natural to your story. Read your draft aloud—if it flows and sounds like you, you’re on the right track! If possible, share with someone you trust for feedback on whether it feels engaging or confusing. Trust your instincts, and remember that what matters most is authenticity, not sticking to a strict template.
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