Does anyone know what Jeffrey Wang wrote his college essay about?
I've been hearing a lot of talk online about applicants who supposedly got into top schools with unique essays, and Jeffrey Wang's name pops up a lot. I was wondering if anyone knows what his essay was actually about or what made it stand out?
I'm trying to get inspiration for my own college essays, but I'm feeling really stuck and maybe having a real example (or at least a general idea) would help spark something.
I'm trying to get inspiration for my own college essays, but I'm feeling really stuck and maybe having a real example (or at least a general idea) would help spark something.
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Camille Luong
• 5 months ago
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It's understandable to look for inspiration by hearing about well-known applicants and their essays, but there’s actually quite a bit of legend and rumor surrounding individual college essay topics—especially after an applicant gets into prestigious schools. When it comes to Jeffrey Wang specifically, there isn’t an officially confirmed copy of his essay circulating, and he hasn’t published it publicly (as of mid-2024) in any credible source.
A lot of the stories you find online are more folklore than fact, and sometimes they even get attributed to the wrong people! What people tend to remember about these 'famous' essays is not always the subject, but how original or personal they felt. The real takeaway from cases like Jeffrey Wang’s and other notable admits is that the most memorable essays highlight genuine, specific facets of the writer.
For example, some standout essays choose an unconventional topic (like one MIT admit writing entirely about their love for Rubik’s Cubes), while others find a new way to discuss a common experience, focusing on a small moment: like detailing the moment they realized their interest in architecture from building makeshift shelters in their backyard.
If you’re feeling stuck, try brainstorming experiences that only you could write about. It could be an unusual hobby, a quirky family tradition, a brief encounter that made you see the world differently, or a moment where you had to make a hard choice. Instead of looking for the 'perfect' topic, focus on a story that is authentic and meaningful to you—even if it doesn’t seem dramatic or traditionally impressive.
If you want concrete examples or tips on brainstorming, let me know! The important thing is to tell a story that admissions officers will remember because they can really feel your voice and personality in it.
A lot of the stories you find online are more folklore than fact, and sometimes they even get attributed to the wrong people! What people tend to remember about these 'famous' essays is not always the subject, but how original or personal they felt. The real takeaway from cases like Jeffrey Wang’s and other notable admits is that the most memorable essays highlight genuine, specific facets of the writer.
For example, some standout essays choose an unconventional topic (like one MIT admit writing entirely about their love for Rubik’s Cubes), while others find a new way to discuss a common experience, focusing on a small moment: like detailing the moment they realized their interest in architecture from building makeshift shelters in their backyard.
If you’re feeling stuck, try brainstorming experiences that only you could write about. It could be an unusual hobby, a quirky family tradition, a brief encounter that made you see the world differently, or a moment where you had to make a hard choice. Instead of looking for the 'perfect' topic, focus on a story that is authentic and meaningful to you—even if it doesn’t seem dramatic or traditionally impressive.
If you want concrete examples or tips on brainstorming, let me know! The important thing is to tell a story that admissions officers will remember because they can really feel your voice and personality in it.
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