Can anyone share strong 250-word 'Why This College?' essay examples?

As a Yale graduate and college admissions advisor with over 8 years of experience helping students gain admission to top universities like Harvard, Stanford, and MIT, I know that a 250-word limit for a “Why This College?” essay can feel tight—but it’s still possible to make a big impact if you’re intentional about your content. The strongest essays blend personal interests with unique aspects of the college, showing how those features connect to your goals or experiences.

Here’s a structure you can try:

1. Start with a specific moment or experience that shaped your interest (2–3 sentences). This grabs attention and sets a personal tone.
2. Connect that interest directly to one or two unique aspects of the college (a program, class, professor, lab, club, or tradition). Go beyond generalities like “prestige” or “great faculty.”
3. Briefly show how you’ll get involved and make the most of those opportunities—keep this clear and personal.
4. End with a forward-looking statement that ties back to your opening or encapsulates your excitement.

Example (fictional college known for environmental policy programs):
While volunteering at my city’s river cleanup last April, I realized I didn’t just want to participate—I wanted to create change. At Graydon College, the Center for Urban Ecology’s student-led conservation initiatives immediately spoke to me. I’m excited to join the Eco-Policy Seminar under Professor Lin, whose research on sustainable urban waterways matches the projects I started back home. As a first-generation college student, I’m drawn to Graydon’s mentorship program, which would guide me while I work with peers on creating new city partnerships. I can imagine myself presenting at the annual Green Change Conference and organizing campus sustainability workshops. Graydon isn’t just where I’ll learn about the environment—it’s where I’ll help reimagine what’s possible for urban communities like mine.

This works because it’s specific, shows motivation, and illustrates a two-way fit without using brochure language. If you’re applying to a different school, adjust by identifying campus offerings that genuinely excite you—and be clear about your goals and how you’ll contribute. You’ll be surprised how much you can say in 250 words.

Over the past 8 years, I’ve helped thousands of students turn even the shortest essays into standout pieces that connect their story to a school’s unique opportunities. I’m currently offering free consultations for new Sundial families, where we can review your goals, brainstorm essay ideas, and outline a clear application strategy. You can book one directly through my profile—spots this month are limited.