How important are essays for winning college scholarships?

I've been looking into different college scholarships and reading a lot of requirements, but I'm not sure how much my essays actually matter compared to grades, test scores, or activities.

Do scholarship committees really read all the essays, and what are they actually looking for when they do? I consider myself an okay writer, but I worry that if my essay isn't super unique or touching, I won’t have a shot. Would love to hear how other students tackled their scholarship essays and if anyone has seen a big impact from the essay in particular.

I'm a rising senior and starting to put together some applications, so any advice or real stories about essays making a difference would help a lot.
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Camille Luong
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Essays can play a significant role in winning college scholarships, but how much they matter depends on the type of scholarship. For highly competitive, merit-based, or private scholarships, the essay is often one of the deciding factors after your grades and activities prove you meet basic qualifications. Committees do read essays—especially for larger or named scholarships—because it's often the only way they get to know who you are beyond your numbers and achievements.

While standardized test scores and GPAs get you past the first round of cuts, the essay is where you can stand out. Committees are looking for authenticity, a clear sense of who you are, and an answer that shows you fit the values or mission of the scholarship. They’re not necessarily looking for a "super unique" or heartbreaking story, but rather a thoughtful, honest reflection that gives insight into your character or aspirations.

For example, a friend of mine won a leadership scholarship by writing about starting a gardening club at her school—not because the topic was flashy, but because her essay showed her passion and problem-solving, as well as her ability to bring people together. She focused on a specific challenge (no school funding or interest at first) and how she adapted, leading to a thriving club by senior year. Her grades and activities were in the same range as many other applicants, but her essay set her apart.

If you feel like your story isn’t dramatic, don’t worry. Focus on moments that shaped you, even if they seem small. What did you learn? How did you grow? If you’re applying for a scholarship focused on community service, discuss a meaningful (and specific!) experience where you made a difference or changed your perspective. It’s usually better to zoom in on one moment, conflict, or decision rather than try to cover your whole life.

In summary: Yes, essays absolutely matter for many scholarships. They’re your best chance to leave a personal impression and can often be the difference-maker between finalists. Take time to brainstorm, revise, and have someone else read your drafts. If you’re open to it, sharing your first draft with a trusted mentor or teacher can give you valuable insight and help elevate your application.
Camille Luong
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