Is it okay to write my college essay about sports?

I'm a rising senior and I've been brainstorming topics for my main Common App essay. One of the biggest parts of my life is playing soccer on my school team, and I've learned a lot from it, both on and off the field. I've heard mixed advice, though, about writing sports essays—some people say admissions officers see too many of them and they're kind of cliché.

But honestly, some of my best personal stories and growth have happened because of soccer, especially when I struggled coming back from an injury last year. I want to be genuine in my essay, but I also don't want to hurt my application by choosing a topic they might be tired of reading. Has anyone written about sports and gotten good feedback? Or should I avoid it and pick something less common?

Would love to know what others have heard or experienced with sports topics in essays, especially from current college students or people who've already applied.
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Camille Luong
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You’re absolutely right that sports essays are extremely common in the college admissions process, but the real issue isn’t so much the topic itself—it's how you approach it and what you reveal about yourself. Admissions readers have seen hundreds of essays about winning championships, losing big games, and overcoming a standard sports injury. What grabs their attention is not the sport or even the obstacle, but your unique perspective, voice, and the underlying story.

If soccer truly shaped who you are, you can absolutely write about it! The trick is to focus on a very specific moment or challenge and dig deep into how you responded and who you became as a result. Instead of a generic summary ("I was injured, worked hard, and learned perseverance"), pick a vivid, personal episode. For example, maybe there was a single bench moment you felt left behind, or a specific interaction with a teammate while rehabbing your injury. Maybe recovering from injury led you to start mentoring new players, or taught you something unexpected about leadership or empathy that spilled over into your life off the field.

A student once wrote about missing an important penalty kick and, instead of focusing on the disappointment, detailed how it became the spark for organizing team-building sessions so mistakes wouldn’t define team morale. This approach worked because the essay looked beyond the game—that small experience connected to personal growth and initiative, and wasn’t just about sports.

If your soccer story comes with that kind of depth and a sharp, personal angle, it can succeed. Don’t be afraid to be vulnerable and honest about what was hard or what you’re still working through. Avoid ending with the cliché "sports taught me hard work" summary—instead, let the reader see you wrestling with what the experience really meant to you.

If you think you’ll fall into those common sports essay traps, it’s worth considering another topic, but if you can show how soccer shaped you in a way only you could tell, go for it! Remember, authenticity and self-reflection matter most.
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