What should I focus on in my Pomona College supplemental essays?

Pomona’s supplemental essays are definitely known for encouraging genuine self-reflection, but it’s understandable to feel unsure about where to start! For prompts like the one on diversity, the most important thing is to offer a specific, authentic snapshot of your life and how you think, rather than trying to sound impressive or deliver the "right" answer.

When it comes to how personal you should get, lean toward being open—Pomona wants students who can bring their whole selves to campus, so being vulnerable is a plus as long as you still feel comfortable sharing the story. It's less about the gravity of your experience and more about your insight and growth. For example, one student wrote about growing up in a multilingual household and subtly code-switching between languages at home, school, and with friends. Their essay was less about the mechanics of language, more about how this shaped their adaptability and openness to others in new environments.

Regarding whether to lean academic or personal: Pomona values intellectual curiosity but also looks for students who are reflective and community-minded. If you can, find an experience that links both. For instance, maybe a classroom debate about a social issue led you to reevaluate your own biases or to start a club that celebrates diverse perspectives. You could write about a small but meaningful moment—like organizing a cultural food day in your school, and the awkward but enlightening conversations it provoked.

Standing out isn’t about having the rarest experience, but about owning your angle. Focus on genuine moments that changed your outlook, even if they seem minor. If you’re deeply interested in a topic—like a book, scientific issue, or community concern—explain how it pushed you to see the world differently or act in new ways.

A tip: before you start writing, jot down 2-3 moments when you felt challenged or changed. Then, consider how you thought or felt before, the moment or interaction itself, and what changed after. That arc will help your essay feel natural and reflective, not forced.

Overall, Pomona wants to see YOUR voice and values. The best essays often come from a place of honest reflection, not from searching for the most unique plotline. If you’re comfortable being real—and a little vulnerable—you’ll find your essay will resonate.