What are some tips for writing a strong personal statement essay for college applications?

Starting your personal statement can feel overwhelming, but focusing on your authentic story is the most important step. Admissions officers aren't just looking for a list of accomplishments—they want a window into who you are, how you think, and what genuinely matters to you.

Instead of trying to cover every club, job, or passion, think about a specific moment or challenge that shaped your perspective. The most compelling essays often zoom in on a single experience (even a small one) that reveals something personal. For example, instead of a general essay about volunteer work, you could describe a conversation you had with someone while volunteering that changed your outlook—maybe a moment when you had to navigate an awkward cultural misunderstanding, and what you learned from it.

Don't stress about being the only person who's ever written on your topic. Originality often comes less from the topic itself, and more from your unique point of view. Simple, everyday stories can stand out when told sincerely and with detail. As you brainstorm, ask yourself:

- What sparks strong emotion—pride, embarrassment, surprise?
- When was a time you made a difficult decision or re-evaluated a belief?
- Is there an object, place, or routine that’s unusually important to you?

In terms of structure, a tried-and-true method is to start with a vivid scene that draws the reader in, then reflect on what it taught you or how it relates to your growth. For example: "I’m perched on top of a rickety ladder in my grandfather’s garage, holding a paintbrush I don’t know how to use …" works better than, "I learned a lot from helping to paint my grandfather’s house."

Be careful not to:
- List achievements (leave these for your activities section)
- Use clichés ("I learned the value of teamwork," or "hard work pays off")
- Focus on what you think colleges want rather than who you really are

Don’t be afraid to show vulnerability or discuss a mistake, as long as you reflect on your growth. But it’s wise to avoid topics that are too intensely personal or traumatic unless you’re sure you can write about them thoughtfully and safely.

A test: Read your draft aloud to someone who knows you well. If they say, “That sounds just like you,” you’re on the right track.

Ultimately, your voice and reflection should take center stage. Your achievements get you in the applicant pool, but your story is what will be remembered.