How can I write a successful college essay?

Starting your college essay can definitely feel daunting, but you’re already on the right track by wanting your genuine voice to come through. Admissions officers read thousands of essays, so the ones that stand out usually do two things well: they reveal something authentic about you, and they tell a story only you could tell.

Instead of focusing purely on achievements (which can already be seen in your activities list or resume), use the essay to go deeper. Share the thought process behind your actions, what you learned from a challenge, or how a small moment changed your perspective. For example, instead of listing your debate team awards, you might write about a specific argument that changed how you handle disagreements in your everyday life. Consider a narrow focus—describe a specific afternoon, conversation, or turning point—rather than sweeping generalizations about who you are.

A common mistake is to write what you think the admissions committee wants to hear or to choose overused topics without adding a unique twist. Avoid clichés like "overcoming a sports injury" unless your experience led you somewhere unexpected. Another pitfall is making the essay too formal or too casual; write in the way you’d speak to a favorite teacher—thoughtful, but real.

One tip is to read your draft out loud. If it sounds stiff, try rewriting it as if you’re talking to a friend. Reflect on what really matters to you, not what looks most impressive. In my experience working with students, the most memorable essays were about unusual hobbies, small moments of kindness, or even failures that sparked growth. One student, for example, wrote about their habit of baking bread with their grandmother every Sunday and tied it into lessons of patience and resilience.

Let your personality, values, and quirks show in your writing. Admissions officers aren’t looking for perfection; they’re trying to get a sense of the person behind the application. Be honest, specific, and take time to revise. Starting is the hardest part, so pick a moment or theme that matters to you, and the rest will get easier!