Can anyone share a good example of a diversity essay for college applications?

A strong diversity essay is authentic, specific, and highlights a perspective you bring that most others on campus may not. What makes these essays stand out isn’t the background itself but the depth and detail in how you describe your experiences and their impact on you and others.

A common misconception is that you have to write about race or ethnicity for a diversity essay. You can focus on any aspect of your background, identity, culture, or experience that has shaped your point of view—this might include your family dynamics, religion, a formative personal challenge, your community, language, socioeconomic background, or unique interests.

A simple, effective structure is:
1. Describe a specific moment, challenge, or tradition that shaped how you see the world.
2. Share how that experience has defined you and influenced your values.
3. Explain how this perspective will help you contribute to the campus community.

Example outline:
"Ever since I was eight, I translated for my parents at doctor’s offices and parent-teacher conferences. The pressure of getting everything right made me anxious, but it also pushed me to develop strong communication skills and empathy—especially for people in unfamiliar environments. Through this, I realized the importance of accessible language in public services. I started volunteering as a bilingual assistant at a library. There, I created a ‘welcome folder’ in different languages for new families, helping others feel included and understood. This experience taught me how little changes can have a big impact.

On campus, I hope to foster that same spirit by joining peer mentoring programs and advocating for resources for first-generation college students. I believe I can help bridge cultural and language divides and make our community more welcoming to everyone."

Key elements that make an essay effective:
- Specificity: Focus on real moments, not vague feelings.
- Impact: Show how the experience changed you and how you use it in your life.
- Forward-thinking: Explain how your perspective will add value at the college.

Try to avoid clichés and instead drill down to the details that are unique to you. If you’re stuck, brainstorm moments when you felt different, challenged expectations, or built bridges between groups. These tend to produce genuine and memorable essays.