Can anyone share examples of their 'Tell Us Your Story' college essays?

Absolutely, the 'Tell Us Your Story' prompt can feel daunting because it really is open to interpretation. There’s no one right way to answer it, and the beauty is you have space to show what matters most to you. Though I can’t post full essays from other applicants for privacy reasons, I can definitely share some examples of different directions students have taken as well as tips for structuring your own response.

Some students focus on a defining challenge or adversity, but others stand out by choosing a less dramatic, yet deeply personal story. For instance, one applicant wrote about the ritual of making tamales with their grandmother every holiday season. Through describing the process—folding corn husks, sharing family stories, and the final meal—the essay revealed their appreciation for heritage, patience, and the warmth of family connection. What made that memorable was the specificity: you really felt like you were in the kitchen with them.

Another student started with an everyday object: their battered sketchbook. The essay went on to explore how doodling during classes was initially a nervous habit but turned into a passion for visual storytelling, and ultimately, designing posters for school events—helping them build confidence and social connections.

A helpful tip is to focus on a memorable moment or small event, then zoom out to show what you learned. For example, maybe it’s the first time you advocated for someone else, or a summer volunteering experience that shifted your perspective. The key is to be authentic and specific—let the story feel like only you could tell it.

For inspiration, try making a list of moments that changed your thinking or taught you something new, no matter how small they seem. Think of sights, sounds, emotions, or routines that are uniquely yours. Starting with a vivid scene can help readers immediately picture your world.

If you want direct feedback as you brainstorm or draft, there are resources (like Sundial Essay Review) where you can get personal guidance. The most memorable essays are those where the writer is honest, even vulnerable, and avoids trying to fit a mold. Trust your story, even if it doesn’t seem dramatic—it can still be powerful if it’s true to you.