Where can I find real examples of successful college essays?

You're definitely not alone—reading actual examples is a great way to break through writer's block and get a feel for what works. Many official university admissions websites publish sample essays from students who were accepted. For example, Johns Hopkins shares 'Essays That Worked,' which includes real essays along with why they stood out to admissions. The University of Chicago also has a few on their admissions page.

Some books can be helpful too, such as '50 Successful Harvard Application Essays' and 'Decoded: Unlocking College Essays for Successful Admission.' They compile essays plus commentary about what made each essay powerful.

There are also online outlets that collect and publish accepted essays, like the New York Times' annual 'Standout College Essays' feature. You’ll find these essays cover a huge range of topics and styles—from lighthearted and quirky to deeply reflective.

Keep in mind: use these as inspiration, not templates. What stands out the most are essays that authentically reflect the writer’s unique voice and experiences. Once you've read a few, try to jot down what stood out to you (an opening hook, a specific detail, the way personal growth is shown), and brainstorm how you might share your own stories in a similar way.

When you're ready, it can help to write a draft even if you’re not sure it’s 'good.' Revising and refining tends to bring out your authentic voice more clearly. If you’d ever like targeted feedback, feel free to ask here or share your work. Good luck—you’ve got this!