Where can I find strong compare and contrast essay examples for college applications?

I've been trying to brainstorm ideas for my college essays, and my counselor suggested that I might want to do a compare and contrast essay to show my critical thinking skills. But I'm kind of stuck on how to structure one that's engaging and still relevant to the college prompts.

Does anyone have examples, or know where I could read some actual compare and contrast essays that worked for college admissions? I think it would help me figure out what admissions officers are looking for and how detailed I should get. Preferably something that's not just a generic school assignment, but an actual personal essay. Any tips on dos and don'ts for this format would also be awesome!
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Camille Luong
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It's great that you're thinking about structure and creativity in your college essays! Compare and contrast essays can absolutely help showcase your critical thinking, especially if you use personal, meaningful experiences to anchor the comparison.

For college applications, a strong compare and contrast essay usually isn’t about the typical 'school assignment' topics (like comparing cats to dogs), but rather about two sides of your own experience, identity, or perspectives. For example, some students have written effective essays comparing their life before and after a major event, or contrasting two places they consider home. One memorable essay I read compared a student’s experiences at two different churches—the traditions, people, and her feelings about belonging at each. The essay successfully revealed her adaptability, her growing sense of cultural identity, and her nuanced view of community.

While you won’t find many labeled 'compare and contrast' college essays in published resources, you can look for personal statements or supplemental essays where applicants discuss dualities in their life. Websites like 'Johns Hopkins Essays That Worked' or 'Tufts Essays That Worked' have real examples, and you may spot essays that use this structure (e.g., comparing their hometown vs. host country in an exchange year, or contrasting two passions, like art and science).

When using this format for admissions, here are a few dos and don'ts:

Do:
- Choose comparisons that relate directly to your growth, identity, or values.
- Use the structure to highlight your evolution or decision-making process.
- Anchor your essay in specific anecdotes rather than general traits.
- Show, rather than tell; let readers see both sides through your lived experiences.

Don't:
- Just list similarities/differences without analysis or personal connection.
- Rely on broad or cliché topics (like 'city vs. country life') unless you can bring unique insights.
- Lose sight of the prompt—be sure your compare and contrast reveals something admissions officers can’t learn elsewhere in your application.

If you’re still stuck, try jotting down moments in your life when you were pulled between two choices or perspectives. For example, you might write about balancing your family’s traditions with your own modern views, or the mental shift between two seemingly contrasting extracurriculars (like robotics and debate).

Lastly, reading nonfiction personal essays from magazines (like The New York Times' Modern Love or Opinion sections) can also spark ideas for dynamic, contrast-driven narrative structures.

Good luck! Let your unique perspective lead the way, and be sure that the comparison shines a light on what matters to you.
Camille Luong
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