Where can I find good examples of college entry essays?

A great way to get started with your personal statement and supplemental essays is to read examples that worked for students admitted to top schools. For Ivy League and other highly competitive colleges, several resources can help you see what strong essays look like.

One of the most accessible resources is the admission office websites of certain universities. For example, Johns Hopkins has a page called 'Essays That Worked' where you can see actual essays submitted by admitted students along with notes from admissions officers. Tufts University and Hamilton College also publicly share essays from successful applicants, with commentary to help you understand what made each essay compelling.

Books can be a fantastic resource too. Collections like '50 Successful Harvard Application Essays' or 'Accepted! 50 Successful College Admission Essays' provide a diverse range of essay topics, structures, and voices. These books often include explanations of why the essay stood out, which can be particularly helpful as you develop your own ideas.

When you're looking at examples, pay close attention to the personal voice, authenticity, and specificity. The essays that stand out usually go beyond a straightforward narrative—they reflect honest self-reflection, vulnerability, or unique perspectives. For instance, someone might write about a singular, defining moment (like organizing a birthday party for a parent during a tough time), showing personality through vivid details and insight rather than focusing on a broad life journey.

Besides structure and tone, colleges appreciate creativity and introspection. If you can show ways you've grown, changed, or gained a new outlook (even from a small or everyday experience), your essay is more likely to catch a reader’s attention.

One last piece of advice: don't get caught up in trying to mimic someone else's essay. Use other essays for inspiration, but make sure your writing feels true to you—admissions officers are good at spotting authenticity. With that in mind, you'll find examples helpful not just for ideas, but for understanding how to use your own experiences to craft a memorable story.

Good luck with your brainstorming! If you want some feedback or further guidance, feel free to ask for specific tips as you start drafting.