What makes a college application essay stand out to admissions?

Admissions officers read thousands of essays each season, so what really sets an essay apart is that combination of an authentically personal story, strong writing, and a clear sense of who you are.

First and foremost, focus on a story that reveals something meaningful about you—something only you could write. The topic itself doesn’t have to be earth-shattering or wildly unique, but the way you reflect on your experience should be personal and specific. For example, someone once wrote a standout essay about fixing watches with their grandfather—what made it memorable wasn’t the hobby, but how they connected the patient, meticulous craft to how they approach challenges in life. It showed values like persistence and being present, all through a small, vivid slice of their world.

Strong essays often zoom in on a particular moment or conflict, rather than trying to summarize your whole life. This helps you show (instead of tell) how you think, feel, and grow. For instance, if you’re discussing a time you failed, don’t just explain what happened and what you learned—bring the reader into the moment. Describe how it felt, what specific actions you took after, and how that changed your perspective.

Writing style matters too, but not because you need super fancy vocabulary or complex sentences. Clear, engaging prose—often with a dash of humor or vulnerability—can be very effective. Authentic voice is key. Admissions officers want to "hear" you in the essay.

Finally, connect your experience to broader qualities that colleges value, like curiosity, resilience, empathy, or intellectual passion. But let these values come through in how you narrate and reflect, rather than tacking them on at the end.

A good approach is to draft a few stories or moments that stick with you, then pick the one that feels most alive when you write it. Ask yourself: Would another student be able to write this in almost the same way? If yes, drill deeper or explore a different moment until you find your unique spin.

Remember, admissions officers look for essays that let them imagine you as part of their community. Show not just what happened, but how it made you the kind of person who brings something special to campus.

If you remain true to your own voice and perspective, and take the reader somewhere genuine, you’ll be on the right track.