Where can I find good personal essay examples for college applications?

Finding strong personal essay examples can really help you get a sense of what works—and what stands out. There are several trustworthy resources you can explore for reading sample essays that got students into great schools.

One classic option is the book '50 Successful Harvard Application Essays.' It covers a diverse set of voices, interests, and backgrounds, plus each essay is followed by commentary, so you learn what made it effective. Books like 'College Essay Essentials' by Ethan Sawyer also offer annotated examples with tips and writing strategies.

Online, the New York Times 'On Campus' section publishes examples annually—look up their 'College Essays That Worked' series, which collects real essays and writer reflections. Johns Hopkins University publishes actual accepted essays with notes about why they resonated with admissions. Some university admissions sites (like Tufts, Barnard, or Connecticut College) host their own collections, typically with commentary. Blogs by college counselors often post de-identified examples as well—you might find these by browsing for 'real college application essays' or 'Common App essay examples.'

As for overdone stories: topics like sports injuries, moving, or family immigration stories do show up a lot. They can still work, but only if you bring a unique twist or tell a really personal, specific story. For instance, instead of broadly talking about being on the swim team, write about a moment you coached a teammate through a challenge no one else noticed. The key is focusing on detailed, original moments.

When it comes to 'how personal is too personal,' the best essays often include vulnerability, but shouldn't share anything that makes you uncomfortable or could cross boundaries (like illegal behavior, trauma without processing, or extremely sensitive family issues). Ask yourself: would I be okay if a stranger read this and do I feel I've shown personal growth?

Try reading varied sample essays, jot down what makes each memorable, and pay attention to storytelling techniques. For example, I once thought my topic (learning how to fix bikes in my neighborhood) was basic—until I read an essay about fixing typewriters and realized how small stories can be really powerful if you connect them to who you are. Let that inspire you to find your own unique angle!

Good luck—you’re definitely not alone in feeling stuck at the beginning. Sometimes, the right example can spark the idea you need to get your draft moving.