What are some tips for writing strong essays for Princeton?
I’m starting to brainstorm for my Princeton application, and I’m getting a little overwhelmed by the variety of supplemental essays they ask for. I know the prompts change sometimes, but is there a general strategy or style they seem to prefer in responses?
If anyone has examples of what worked for them (especially for the 'your voice' prompt), that would be really helpful. I’m not sure if I should try to be super creative, or if they’re looking more for clear and straightforward answers. Also, how much do these essays actually impact your chances compared to things like GPA or test scores?
Any advice on common mistakes or things to avoid would be appreciated too!
If anyone has examples of what worked for them (especially for the 'your voice' prompt), that would be really helpful. I’m not sure if I should try to be super creative, or if they’re looking more for clear and straightforward answers. Also, how much do these essays actually impact your chances compared to things like GPA or test scores?
Any advice on common mistakes or things to avoid would be appreciated too!
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Camille Luong
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Princeton’s supplemental essays are a key way for you to stand out beyond grades and test scores, and admissions officers take them seriously. They want to get past your statistics and see how you think, what you care about, and whether you’ll bring something special to their community.
For general strategy, Princeton values authenticity, depth, and reflection. Instead of grand, sweeping stories, focus on specific moments that reveal something about you—especially the way you think or approach the world. For example, if you tackle the 'your voice' prompt, highlight an experience or perspective that’s truly yours, even if it feels a little vulnerable. Creativity is good, but not at the expense of clarity and honesty.
For the 'your voice' prompt, don’t feel the need to be outrageous or ‘quirky’ unless that truly fits you. Many successful essays have been quiet and thoughtful. For instance, one student wrote about translating for their grandmother in medical settings, highlighting the power and responsibility of having a voice for others. Another shared the story behind a family dish, using food as a metaphor for heritage, adaptation, and understanding. Both were focused, personal stories that wouldn’t apply to anyone else. Try to identify something in your life that only you could write about, whether it’s a belief, a tradition, a debate, or a moment you found your voice (or lost it temporarily).
A common pitfall is trying to pack the essay with big achievements or to write what you think the committee wants to hear. Princeton can see straight through inauthenticity. Avoid generic topics like sports injuries or moving to a new school—unless you can approach them from a very unique and personal angle. Focus more on how you interpreted the experience and what changed within you, not just what happened.
The essays really do matter. For Princeton, where nearly everyone has an impressive academic record, it’s your essays and recommendations that help admissions officers decide who will thrive on campus and add to the community. Use them to show depth, curiosity, and a willingness to reflect.
As you brainstorm, jot down stories or moments that changed you, challenged you, or brought out something new in you—even small ones. Reflect on what you took away from these moments. Revision is important; Princeton expects polished writing, so give yourself time to edit.
Most importantly, let your real voice and personality shine through. The goal is for someone reading your essay to feel like they’ve met you, even before you arrive on campus.
For general strategy, Princeton values authenticity, depth, and reflection. Instead of grand, sweeping stories, focus on specific moments that reveal something about you—especially the way you think or approach the world. For example, if you tackle the 'your voice' prompt, highlight an experience or perspective that’s truly yours, even if it feels a little vulnerable. Creativity is good, but not at the expense of clarity and honesty.
For the 'your voice' prompt, don’t feel the need to be outrageous or ‘quirky’ unless that truly fits you. Many successful essays have been quiet and thoughtful. For instance, one student wrote about translating for their grandmother in medical settings, highlighting the power and responsibility of having a voice for others. Another shared the story behind a family dish, using food as a metaphor for heritage, adaptation, and understanding. Both were focused, personal stories that wouldn’t apply to anyone else. Try to identify something in your life that only you could write about, whether it’s a belief, a tradition, a debate, or a moment you found your voice (or lost it temporarily).
A common pitfall is trying to pack the essay with big achievements or to write what you think the committee wants to hear. Princeton can see straight through inauthenticity. Avoid generic topics like sports injuries or moving to a new school—unless you can approach them from a very unique and personal angle. Focus more on how you interpreted the experience and what changed within you, not just what happened.
The essays really do matter. For Princeton, where nearly everyone has an impressive academic record, it’s your essays and recommendations that help admissions officers decide who will thrive on campus and add to the community. Use them to show depth, curiosity, and a willingness to reflect.
As you brainstorm, jot down stories or moments that changed you, challenged you, or brought out something new in you—even small ones. Reflect on what you took away from these moments. Revision is important; Princeton expects polished writing, so give yourself time to edit.
Most importantly, let your real voice and personality shine through. The goal is for someone reading your essay to feel like they’ve met you, even before you arrive on campus.
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