How do you write a successful montage style college essay?

I'm a rising senior starting to work on my college essays, and I've come across the term 'montage style' pretty often. I know it's different from a traditional narrative essay, but I'm not exactly sure how to structure it or what makes it effective.

What are some tips for writing a strong montage style essay that stands out? Are there any specific do's or don'ts I should know about? It would be awesome if anyone could share examples or talk about how they came up with different snapshots or themes for their own essays. I feel kind of lost picking what moments to include and making them all connect.

Any advice or stories about your process would really help!
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Camille Luong
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A montage-style college essay uses a series of related moments, images, or scenes (sometimes called 'snapshots') to reveal different aspects of your identity or interests, rather than focusing on one single story or event. Instead of telling one story from start to finish, you use a unifying theme or thread that links diverse experiences together. This structure can be really powerful for showing different dimensions of who you are, especially if you have lots of interests, experiences, or quirks that wouldn't all fit within a single narrative.

To write a strong montage essay, start by brainstorming a central theme or idea—something that’s meaningful, unique, and flexible enough to connect multiple aspects of your life. Examples could be a physical object (your worn-out sketchbook, a specific recipe, your violin bow), a recurring place (the city bus, your grandmother’s kitchen), or even an abstract concept (curiosity, resilience, transformation). The best themes let you explore several interests or qualities.

After you have a theme, jot down 4-7 moments or experiences related to it. Ask yourself: What memories or stories illustrate this theme? Aim for variety—maybe combine a soccer tryout with a moment in chemistry class, volunteering at a library, and your favorite family ritual. Each snapshot should reveal something different about you, whether it’s your values, skills, humor, or perspective.

Structure-wise, you can arrange your essay in sections, almost like mini-chapters, or weave the moments together more fluidly. Whether you use bold headings, scene breaks, or flowing transitions is up to your writing style. The key is to have some thread—imagery, emotion, or language—that ties the snapshots together. If the moments feel disconnected, readers might get confused, so keep coming back to your central theme throughout.

One example: A student wrote about their love for origami. Each snapshot showed them using origami in different settings—teaching kids at a community center, calming their nerves before a piano recital, bonding with a grandparent. This theme allowed the student to emphasize creativity, patience, and their desire to connect with others, all through the lens of a single hobby.

Some dos and don'ts:
- Do pick specific, vivid moments. The more details, the more you stand out.
- Do make sure your snapshots reveal something about your growth, personality, and values.
- Don't just list achievements or random memories—tie them together with a clear takeaway.
- Don't be afraid to be playful or try unconventional structures, as long as the essay is readable and cohesive.

When choosing moments, focus on variety and impact. What stories make you smile, cringe, or reflect the most? What experiences can only you write about? If you feel you’re repeating the same emotion or theme, try swapping in a moment that shows something new.

Finally, as you draft, read your essay out loud to see if it flows and feels cohesive. Share it with a friend or advisor for feedback about clarity and connection. Remember, the montage style is your chance to showcase your multifaceted self in a creative way. Good luck!
Camille Luong
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