Where can I find standout MIT college essay examples?
I'm currently working on my MIT application essays and feeling stuck. It's kind of intimidating to figure out what MIT is looking for, and I want to write something original without sounding fake.
Does anyone know where I can read sample essays from students who actually got into MIT? I think seeing some real examples would help me get a better sense of the voice and stories that work. If you have any links or know of any books or websites that compile good MIT essays, please let me know!
Does anyone know where I can read sample essays from students who actually got into MIT? I think seeing some real examples would help me get a better sense of the voice and stories that work. If you have any links or know of any books or websites that compile good MIT essays, please let me know!
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Camille Luong
• 4 months ago
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Getting inspired by real, successful MIT essays is a smart approach when you’re trying to find your own voice. One popular resource is MIT Admissions’ own website: they’ve published several blog posts where current students and recent admits share their essays, sometimes even with commentary about what makes them effective. Look for posts titled “My MIT Essays” on http://mitadmissions.org/blogs. These aren't necessarily exhaustive, but they're authentic and unfiltered, written directly by students.
Online college admissions forums and blogs sometimes have compiled MIT essay examples in the form of anonymized posts or longer threads. One thing to keep in mind is that some websites may have people sharing essays that weren’t actually accepted, so always check whether the author explicitly mentions their acceptance to MIT.
There are also essay anthology books like “College Essay Essentials” by Ethan Sawyer, which feature essays accepted at highly selective schools, sometimes including MIT. You may also want to check out Reddit’s r/ApplyingToCollege subreddit, where some users post their successful essays in "Results" threads each year. Just remember: essays posted on forums are only as reliable as the posters themselves, so take them with a grain of salt.
As you analyze examples, pay attention to how the essays reflect personal quirks or nerdy passions, not just generic academic achievement. For instance, an applicant once wrote about building a machine in their garage and the trial-and-error process behind it—focusing not on success, but how they learned to embrace failure and wonder. MIT loves essays that are personal, a bit playful, and vividly specific.
Don’t aim to copy another essay’s style or topic. Instead, use these samples to see how students blend personal stories, voice, and authenticity. After reading a few, you’ll probably notice there’s no single "MIT style"—those essays stand out precisely because they sound like the person who wrote them.
Finally, if you want deeper feedback on your own drafts, it can be helpful to get them reviewed by trusted advisors familiar with MIT’s process. You’re on the right track by seeking inspiration, but the most memorable essay will come from your own unique lens and genuine story.
Online college admissions forums and blogs sometimes have compiled MIT essay examples in the form of anonymized posts or longer threads. One thing to keep in mind is that some websites may have people sharing essays that weren’t actually accepted, so always check whether the author explicitly mentions their acceptance to MIT.
There are also essay anthology books like “College Essay Essentials” by Ethan Sawyer, which feature essays accepted at highly selective schools, sometimes including MIT. You may also want to check out Reddit’s r/ApplyingToCollege subreddit, where some users post their successful essays in "Results" threads each year. Just remember: essays posted on forums are only as reliable as the posters themselves, so take them with a grain of salt.
As you analyze examples, pay attention to how the essays reflect personal quirks or nerdy passions, not just generic academic achievement. For instance, an applicant once wrote about building a machine in their garage and the trial-and-error process behind it—focusing not on success, but how they learned to embrace failure and wonder. MIT loves essays that are personal, a bit playful, and vividly specific.
Don’t aim to copy another essay’s style or topic. Instead, use these samples to see how students blend personal stories, voice, and authenticity. After reading a few, you’ll probably notice there’s no single "MIT style"—those essays stand out precisely because they sound like the person who wrote them.
Finally, if you want deeper feedback on your own drafts, it can be helpful to get them reviewed by trusted advisors familiar with MIT’s process. You’re on the right track by seeking inspiration, but the most memorable essay will come from your own unique lens and genuine story.
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