What are some tips for writing an engaging hook for my college essay?

Feeling stuck on your first sentence is incredibly common — a lot of students wrestle with the hook, especially since there’s so much pressure for it to be perfect. The good news is that there isn’t just one formula for a great hook.

Here are a few strategies that can help:

1. Start with an anecdote or vivid scene: Jump right into a memorable moment that says something about you. For example, “My palms were sweating as I hovered over the ‘submit’ button, uncertain if the app I’d spent six months building would even load.” This pulls the reader in and sets a scene, making them want to read more.

2. Use a bit of dialogue: If your essay revolves around a key conversation in your life, starting with dialogue can be very engaging. For example: “‘Are you sure this is safe?’ my brother whispered as we snuck out to stargaze on the school roof.” Just be sure it’s relevant and natural.

3. Pose a meaningful question: If your essay explores a question you’ve grappled with, you can drop your reader in with it. Try something higher-stakes than a generic “Who am I?” For example: “What do you do when everyone you admire expects you to fail?”

4. Open with a bold or unexpected statement: This works if you’re able to connect it later to your main story. For instance: “I have never eaten a cupcake.” If your essay is about growing up with food allergies and how it’s shaped your social life and leadership, it’ll all make sense.

5. Avoid clichés and generic statements: Phrases like “Since I was young, I’ve always loved…” are overused and won’t stand out.

A lot of students come up with the hook after writing the body of their essay. Once you know your theme and the tone, it’s easier to craft a line that really fits. Try writing the rest of your essay first, then go back and see which moment or idea feels most compelling as an opener.

One trick: Pick the most unusual or memorable moment from your story and see if you can drop the reader right in without much explanation. You can always clarify as you move into the essay.

Remember, the hook just needs to make a reader want more and offer a little window into your world. If you feel stuck, write a few different opening lines, then ask friends or teachers which ones grab their attention. Once you find a hook that clicks, you’ll often find the rest of the introduction becomes much easier to write.