How do you write a strong conclusion for a college essay?

I'm currently revising my college essay, but I'm stuck figuring out how to end it effectively. The middle of the essay feels okay to me, but I keep second guessing how to wrap everything up. Do colleges want a super dramatic or poetic conclusion, or is it better to keep it simple and straightforward?

I feel like everything I write for the last paragraph either sounds corny or too vague. What are some strategies other students are using to end their personal statement on a high note? Would appreciating the lessons learned in the story be enough, or do I need to directly tie everything back to my major or future goals? Any advice or examples would be really appreciated, I just want to make sure my essay feels complete without overselling it.
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Camille Luong
 • 4 months ago
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Feeling stuck on the conclusion is really common, and it makes sense since this is the last impression you’ll leave with the admissions office. A strong conclusion doesn’t have to be dramatic or overly poetic. In fact, often the most impactful endings are simple, authentic, and reflective.

One of the most effective techniques is to subtly revisit your essay’s opening or main theme in a fresh way. This creates a sense of cohesion and brings your story full circle without repeating yourself. For example, if your essay begins with a specific moment, like nervously standing backstage before a performance, you could end with how you felt stepping onto the stage years later, now confident and excited by uncertainty.

You don’t need to tie everything directly to your major unless your essay is already focused on that. It’s totally okay to reflect on lessons learned or describe a shift in your perspective. Try to capture a concrete thought or feeling for your last lines—something that lingers with the reader. Even a sentence or two that hints at your growth or ongoing curiosity is plenty. For instance, "I still keep the scrunched-up debate team notecard in my desk, a reminder that being unprepared sometimes leads to the biggest surprises."

Students sometimes write about how their experiences have prepared them for the future or changed the way they see the world. This can work, especially if you avoid grand statements and stay true to your story. Instead of saying, "This taught me to pursue my dreams," go for something more grounded, like, "Now, uncertainty doesn’t paralyze me. It motivates me."

Many strong essays end quietly. They don’t announce a big revelation but leave the reader with a sense of growth or curiosity. Summing up: Keep your ending authentic, use imagery or callbacks if possible, and focus on personal reflection over big declarations. A thoughtful reflection or even an open-ended ending can feel complete and honest.

If you want to see this in action, read a few sample essays from accepted students. Notice how they often end with a short, specific detail or a reflective insight, not a dramatic conclusion. Aim for your last lines to feel like a window into who you are now, not just a summary of what you’ve done.
Camille Luong
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