Where can I find examples of Harvard college essays that worked?

I’m currently drafting my personal statement for Harvard and I’m starting to feel a little lost about what makes an essay really stand out to their admissions. I’ve seen a few sample essays online, but I’m not sure if they’re truly strong or just average.

Does anyone know where I could read successful Harvard essays from recent applicants? Are there any books, websites, or official resources you’d recommend? If you’ve been accepted or know someone who has, how much did the essay factor in, and what types of stories did you tell?
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Camille Luong
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Finding strong Harvard essay examples can definitely help you get a sense of tone, topics, and structure that work for their admissions process. One of the best places to start is Harvard’s own admissions website. On their "Application Tips" page, they sometimes share insights about what real essays have looked like and what they value in applicants' stories.

There are also curated books, such as '50 Successful Harvard Application Essays' published by the Harvard Crimson. This book provides a mix of topics and styles and includes some commentary on why each essay stands out. It's available at most libraries and online booksellers. Keep in mind, though, that some essays may feel a bit dated—aim to observe what makes the author’s voice unique and how they connect personal moments to broader themes.

Another helpful resource is university blogs. Sometimes, current students post their application essays, typically on platforms like Medium, Reddit (r/ApplyingToCollege), or on their own blogs. For example, searching “accepted Harvard essays” on Google or YouTube can unearth some video readings or written essays from recent years. When reading these, look for authenticity and a clear sense of personality.

In my experience and from talking to others who've been through the process, the essay can make a big difference when your grades and activities are already comparable to other applicants. One Harvard admit I know wrote about her love for baking bread and used her journey with sourdough starters as a metaphor for curiosity and patience. It was quirky and deeply personal—but the bigger reason it stood out was that no one else could have written it.

If you do look at examples, use them for inspiration only. Harvard is interested in what makes you unique. Think about a moment or subject that represents your perspective or values—not just a generic success or hardship story, but one that genuinely shaped how you see the world.

To sum it up: official websites, books curated by university organizations, and student blogs or forums are the best places to find Harvard essay examples. But let them serve as guides, not templates. The magic lies in your own story and how you tell it.
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