How do you create a strong outline for a college-level application essay?

I'm working on my Common App essay and I keep seeing advice to make an outline before writing, but I'm a bit lost on what that actually looks like for a college-level personal statement.

I usually just jot down ideas in a list or start freewriting, but I'm worried my essay will end up all over the place if I don't have a clear structure. Are there specific formats or steps you all use to organize your thoughts and main points before you start the real draft?

If anyone has examples of their own outlines (even just a general structure) or tips that really worked for them, I’d seriously appreciate it. I just want to make sure my essay feels coherent, not just a bunch of random thoughts put together. Also, does anyone recommend focusing on themes first or working through stories/scenes?
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Caroline Benson
 • 6 months ago
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Absolutely, outlining is a crucial step for making your Common App essay organized and impactful. A strong outline helps ensure your narrative flows well and keeps each section tied to your main message.

For college-level application essays, consider using a structure similar to what journalists and creative writers use: a narrative arc. Here’s one way to approach your outline:

1. Hook/Introduction
This is usually a brief anecdote, scene, or statement that draws the reader in. For example, you might start with one vivid moment ("My hands trembled as I dialed the community center’s number...").

2. Setting the Scene
Provide context. Briefly explain how you got to that moment or what the background is. If the intro is the day you started your podcast, this section describes what led you to that point ("A sports injury sidelined me for the season, but I missed the camaraderie and energy of my team...").

3. Rising Action
Develop the story by adding details and describing challenges or decisions you faced. This builds momentum and depth. You might list a few main points you want to cover here, such as lessons learned, setbacks, or moments of self-discovery.

4. Key Moment/Turning Point
Highlight the moment when something changed—what did you realize, decide, or do? For example, "Recording that first episode, I realized my voice could bring my teammates together in a new way."

5. Reflection
Explain what you learned or how you grew. Don’t just state lessons; connect them to your future goals or personal growth ("That experience showed me the value of adaptability, shaping the way I approach challenges now...").

6. Conclusion
Tie back to your opening, reinforce your main message, and end with a forward-looking thought or a memorable line.

Regarding whether to start with themes or stories: it's usually more effective to brainstorm a few key moments or experiences first. Then, look for the theme that connects them. Once you've identified the core message or quality you want to highlight (resilience, creativity, empathy), make sure every section of your outline supports that theme.

For example, here’s what a simple outline might look like:

I. Opening Scene: First nervous podcast recording
II. Background: Soccer injury, missing connection, idea for a podcast
III. Struggles: Learning technology, reaching out to guests, overcoming self-doubt
IV. Turning Point: Positive feedback from a teammate; realization of new leadership skills
V. Reflection: How this changed view on setbacks and personal growth
VI. Ending: Applying lessons to upcoming college transition

Outlines don’t need to be rigid, but having these key points mapped out will keep your essay focused and prevent rambling. You can start with bullet points or short phrases—the main thing is to give your essay a roadmap.

If you want more flexibility, try jotting down your scenes or stories first, arranging them in the order they feel most compelling, and then pulling out the common theme. Many strong college essays blend vivid anecdotes with insights and reflection, all grounded in a clear structure.

Let your outline evolve as you draft, but always make sure you know where your essay is going and what message you want to leave with the reader.
Caroline Benson
Upstate New York
Columbia University (BA); American University in Cairo (MA); Middlebury College (MA)
Experience
9 years