Where can I find really strong Common App essay examples?
I'm starting to brainstorm topics for my Common App personal statement, but honestly, I feel kinda lost about what a successful essay actually looks like. I’ve read through some guides, but I want to see real essays that got students into great colleges, especially ones that aren’t all about dramatic life events.
Does anyone know where I can find a range of genuine essays (maybe with commentary or acceptance results), or does anyone want to share their own? Are there examples from students who wrote about everyday stuff but made it meaningful? I think reading a mix of topics and voices would help me figure out how much personality or storytelling is expected.
Does anyone know where I can find a range of genuine essays (maybe with commentary or acceptance results), or does anyone want to share their own? Are there examples from students who wrote about everyday stuff but made it meaningful? I think reading a mix of topics and voices would help me figure out how much personality or storytelling is expected.
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Camille Luong
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You're not alone in wanting to see real examples—it’s so much easier to understand expectations when you read essays that have actually worked. There are a few reliable places to find strong Common App essays, especially ones that focus on everyday moments, not just dramatic or extraordinary events.
A great resource is the Johns Hopkins ‘Essays That Worked’ site. Every year, they publish a handful of real essays from admitted students and often include admissions officers’ commentary explaining what stood out. Many of these essays are about pretty ordinary experiences, like working in a bakery, playing video games with family, or growing up in a multilingual household. They show how personality and insight can make a simple story compelling. You can check it out here: https://apply.jhu.edu/essays-that-worked/
The NY Times also publishes standout college essays each spring (just search ‘NYT College Essays’), with a mix of topics and students from all over. Some of these touch on big themes, but others are more subtle—like feeling nervous about hosting a neighborhood barbecue, or relating to a pet turtle. These are great for seeing voice and style.
If you’re interested in essays connected to specific acceptance results, the book “College Essay Essentials” by Ethan Sawyer (the College Essay Guy) features both sample essays and reflections/comments from students themselves. Sawyer’s website also provides linked essays, organized by theme, that cover both big and small topics.
As an example, one successful essay I’ve seen was about a student’s fascination with collecting unusual pencils. Through quirky anecdotes, the student showed curiosity, organization, and a sense of humor. The mundane was turned memorable because they zoomed into what those pencils meant for their relationships and interests. The key was focusing on a specific angle and revealing something unique about themselves.
You don’t need to write about a major life event—lots of great essays come from the quiet moments. Look for essays that feel authentic and reflective. Pay attention to how writers connect an everyday experience to a broader trait, lesson, or value.
If you want more discussion or are open to peer sharing, certain college admissions subreddits and forums have students posting their essays, sometimes with detailed acceptance lists. Just be mindful that what works for one person might not work for everyone, but reading a wide range should definitely help inspire you.
Lastly, as you read, focus on how these essays show the writer’s voice and point of view. That’s so much more important than just the topic itself.
A great resource is the Johns Hopkins ‘Essays That Worked’ site. Every year, they publish a handful of real essays from admitted students and often include admissions officers’ commentary explaining what stood out. Many of these essays are about pretty ordinary experiences, like working in a bakery, playing video games with family, or growing up in a multilingual household. They show how personality and insight can make a simple story compelling. You can check it out here: https://apply.jhu.edu/essays-that-worked/
The NY Times also publishes standout college essays each spring (just search ‘NYT College Essays’), with a mix of topics and students from all over. Some of these touch on big themes, but others are more subtle—like feeling nervous about hosting a neighborhood barbecue, or relating to a pet turtle. These are great for seeing voice and style.
If you’re interested in essays connected to specific acceptance results, the book “College Essay Essentials” by Ethan Sawyer (the College Essay Guy) features both sample essays and reflections/comments from students themselves. Sawyer’s website also provides linked essays, organized by theme, that cover both big and small topics.
As an example, one successful essay I’ve seen was about a student’s fascination with collecting unusual pencils. Through quirky anecdotes, the student showed curiosity, organization, and a sense of humor. The mundane was turned memorable because they zoomed into what those pencils meant for their relationships and interests. The key was focusing on a specific angle and revealing something unique about themselves.
You don’t need to write about a major life event—lots of great essays come from the quiet moments. Look for essays that feel authentic and reflective. Pay attention to how writers connect an everyday experience to a broader trait, lesson, or value.
If you want more discussion or are open to peer sharing, certain college admissions subreddits and forums have students posting their essays, sometimes with detailed acceptance lists. Just be mindful that what works for one person might not work for everyone, but reading a wide range should definitely help inspire you.
Lastly, as you read, focus on how these essays show the writer’s voice and point of view. That’s so much more important than just the topic itself.
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