Does anyone have a good college application essay outline template?

I'm starting to stress about my Common App essay because I have a bunch of ideas but no clear way to organize them. I tend to overthink structure, so I end up scrapping drafts before they're finished.

If anyone here has a reliable outline template or a way they broke their essay into sections, could you share? I just want a sense of how to organize my thoughts (like intro, main points, conclusion, etc.) so my essay actually flows. Ideally, it'd help to see something that worked for people who got into competitive schools.

Any tips for stepping through each section would be awesome. Would love suggestions for how to make my story stand out, too!
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Lydia Schooler
 • 7 months ago
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Having a clear outline can be a huge help when you’re feeling overwhelmed by all your ideas for the Common App essay. Here’s a flexible template many successful applicants use, especially for the classic ‘personal growth’ or ‘overcoming challenge’ story, but you can adapt it for any prompt:

1. Hook/Introduction (1 paragraph):
Open with a vivid scene, a surprising statement, a question, or a moment of conflict that ties directly to your main story. Give the reader a snapshot of who you are or what your essay will be about. For example, instead of saying, "I broke my leg playing basketball," try starting with, "My crutches wobbled as I entered the school auditorium, the echo of laughter reminding me I couldn’t join my team’s championship celebration."

2. Background/Context (1-2 paragraphs):
Now give a bit of context. What led up to the hook? What did life look like before this moment? Briefly set up relevant background—just enough so the reader feels invested in your story. Avoid spending too long here; keep the story moving.

3. Rising Action/Challenges (1-2 paragraphs):
Illustrate the challenge, problem, or question you faced. Show your thoughts, emotions, and attempts to handle things, even if those attempts failed at first. This section is great for introspection and building tension. The more specific the scenario or moment, the more memorable it’ll be.

4. Turning Point/Climax (1-2 paragraphs):
Describe a moment of realization, decision, or change. What shifted for you? Did you discover something new about yourself or the world? This is a great spot for a flashback or a specific turning point, like starting a new club, reaching out for help, or standing up for yourself.

5. Resolution/Reflection (1-2 paragraphs):
Explain how the experience changed you, what you learned, and how you’ve grown. Connect back to your introduction or hook. Show, don’t just tell. For example: "As I record my podcast episodes, the echoes of my old teammates’ cheers morph into support from people I’ve never met, but whose stories I now champion."

6. Looking Ahead/Conclusion (1 paragraph):
Share how this experience influences your goals, values, or the kind of community member you will be in college. Try to end on a forward-looking, hopeful note rather than simply summarizing everything you’ve already said.

Tips for flow:
- Use clear transitions to link each part of your story.
- Focus on one or two main themes or character traits—don’t dilute your narrative with too many unrelated details.
- Keep it personal and specific; small details make your essay stand out.

And remember, you don’t have to follow this template rigidly. Sometimes powerful essays break the "rules"—but building a draft from this outline first can give you something solid to revise. Good luck, and don’t hesitate to get messy with drafts before you find what works for you!
Lydia Schooler
New York
Yale University
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