Where can I find strong examples of college scholarship essays?

You’re absolutely right that seeing specific, high-quality examples can be a huge help when starting out. There are a few reliable online sources where you can find well-written scholarship essays. Many scholarship organization websites (like the Coca-Cola Scholars Foundation, Gates Scholarship, or local community foundations) post winning essays on their blogs or past recipients sections. These essays cover a variety of prompts and backgrounds, so you can usually find some from students who don’t have extreme or unusual circumstances.

University admissions offices also post sample scholarship and application essays. Check out the official admissions blogs or resource pages of universities you’re interested in. Sometimes, current or recent students will share their experiences and essay excerpts there.

You can also look to scholarship advice books, like ‘How to Write a Winning Scholarship Essay’ by Gen Tanabe and Kelly Tanabe, which often include a range of examples along with commentary on what makes each one effective.

Another good approach is to search on forums like r/scholarships (on Reddit), where real students sometimes share their essays and detailed feedback. Often, they’ll post both the essay and the prompt, which gives valuable context. You can search older threads for successful essays from students who describe themselves as ‘average’ or with common stories.

If you don’t find direct examples you connect with, try to read essays that focus on a singular event or a specific perspective, rather than a big, life-changing moment. For example, someone wrote about being the middle child in a busy household and how it taught them negotiation and compromise. That student wasn’t a class president or major award-winner but the essay resonated because of its honesty and clear personal reflection.

When you read essays, pay attention to structure: strong essays typically hone in on a specific story, demonstrate clear, authentic voice, and end with a reflection about growth or impact. Even ordinary experiences can be compelling if you express them in a vivid and thoughtful way.

Finally, never be shy about politely asking recent grads or older students from your school if they’d share their essays. Often, people are happy to share and encourage you when asked!