Does anyone have good resources or sample PDFs for outlining college essays?

I'm starting to draft my Common App essay and I keep seeing recommendations to build an outline before actually writing it. I’m really unsure how to structure everything, and I get overwhelmed by too many ideas.

If anyone has a favorite template or a sample PDF outline they used, could you share it or let me know where to find one? I want to make sure my essay has a good flow and hits all the important points. Any advice or examples would seriously help me get unstuck right now.

I’m aiming for a personal story, but I don’t know what makes an outline ‘good’ for this kind of essay, so any tips would be appreciated too!
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Camille Luong
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Outlining is a great place to start, especially since it can really help you organize your ideas and ensure your Common App essay flows well. While there isn’t one ‘best’ outline format, a simple and proven structure for personal statements is the "narrative arc" or "mountain" structure—similar to how stories are traditionally told. Here’s a flexible outline template that you can use, with some tips and an example:

1. Hook (First paragraph)
- Start with a brief, attention-grabbing moment or vivid detail that pulls the reader in.

2. Background / Set-up
- Offer context that quickly explains who you are or what the situation is. Focus on the stakes—why did this moment matter?

3. Challenge or Turning Point
- Show a struggle, conflict, or challenge you experienced. This is where you describe what was at risk or how you felt.

4. Growth and Change
- Explain how you reacted, adapted, or changed as a result. Highlight specific actions you took or realizations you had.

5. Reflection / Broader Significance
- Conclude by reflecting on the impact this experience had on you. Link it to your values or future goals, but keep it grounded in your personal story.

Here’s an example using this outline:
- Hook: "My hands shook the first time I picked up the principal’s office phone to translate for my mom."
- Background: Describe the family situation, being the oldest child in an immigrant family.
- Challenge: The stress and embarrassment of making mistakes, pressure to help, and feeling isolated.
- Growth: Gradually building confidence, learning to advocate for your family and connect cultures.
- Reflection: Realizing a passion for helping others bridge communication gaps—now volunteering as a translator at school events, planning to study linguistics.

If you prefer a visual or fill-in template, universities like Johns Hopkins or College Essay Guy have free resources and printable PDF outlines on their sites. Search for 'common app essay outline PDF'—you'll find options that walk you through each step.

Final tip: Jot down all your ideas, then group related anecdotes or moments together. Start with three main sections: beginning, middle, and end. Once you have that scaffolding, you can fill in details and trim as needed. Don’t worry if your outline changes along the way—the process is meant to get you unstuck and guide your drafting!

If you need more detailed feedback or want someone to look at your outline, definitely reach out for personalized advice as you go. You’ve got this!
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