What are some effective strategies to wrap up a college essay?

I'm almost done drafting my main college essay, but I'm really struggling with the conclusion. I want the ending to feel strong and leave a good impression, but everything I write just sounds kind of weak or repetitive.

Does anyone have tips or examples for how to finish an essay well? Is it better to try to tie everything together or go for a memorable last sentence? If you've finished yours, how did you decide you were really done? I just don't want it to feel forced or cheesy. Any advice would be appreciated!
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Camille Luong
 • 4 months ago
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Ending a college essay well can be tricky, but it’s definitely where you can leave a lasting impression on the reader. The strongest conclusions often do two key things: they briefly tie together the main thread of your story, and they end on a note that feels authentic and powerful (but not forced).

Rather than summarizing everything or restating your thesis, try reflecting in a way that shows your growth. For example, if your essay centers on a particular challenge, your last few lines might hint at how that experience will influence how you approach new opportunities in college. This helps the reader see your forward-thinking attitude, rather than just revisiting what’s already been said.

A memorable last sentence doesn’t have to be dramatic or clever for the sake of it. Sometimes, a quiet moment or a simple realization can linger much longer. For instance, one student who wrote about working at a local bakery ended her essay with the line, “Now, whenever I dust a counter clean or shape dough by hand, I know I’m building more than bread—I’m building the future I want to share.”

When you’re not sure if you’re done, read your essay aloud. Does the ending feel natural and satisfying? It’s okay if it doesn’t tie every loose end—sometimes ambiguity is powerful as long as it fits your message and tone. Ask someone you trust to read just the last paragraph. If they say it feels ‘right’ or they remember the final line, you’re probably close.

Most importantly, avoid clichés like "now I'm ready for college" or "this is just the beginning." Instead, let your unique voice, insight, or even a specific image linger. Try circling back to something from your introduction if it fits—echoing an image or phrase can provide satisfying closure without being repetitive.

Keep revising until the ending feels like you’ve said enough, and you’re not straining to add a moral or lesson. Trust yourself—when you read your conclusion and feel a little spark of pride or even relief, that’s usually a good sign you're truly finished.
Camille Luong
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