What are some effective ways to start a college application essay?
I've been staring at a blank screen for what feels like hours, trying to figure out how to begin my personal statement. I know the introduction is super important for grabbing the reader's attention, but everything I come up with sounds weird or forced.
I'm applying mostly to liberal arts colleges, and I want my essay to stand out without sounding fake or over-the-top. Should I open with a quote, a story, or something more straightforward? If anyone has examples of what worked for them, or advice on what NOT to do, I’d really appreciate it.
Feeling kind of stressed because my English teacher keeps saying "the opening is everything," but I have no idea what that actually means in practice. How did you all figure out your first sentences?
I'm applying mostly to liberal arts colleges, and I want my essay to stand out without sounding fake or over-the-top. Should I open with a quote, a story, or something more straightforward? If anyone has examples of what worked for them, or advice on what NOT to do, I’d really appreciate it.
Feeling kind of stressed because my English teacher keeps saying "the opening is everything," but I have no idea what that actually means in practice. How did you all figure out your first sentences?
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Lydia Schooler
• 6 months ago
Advisor
I’m a Yale graduate and college admissions advisor with over 8 years of experience helping students gain admission to top universities like Harvard, Stanford, and MIT. I’ve guided thousands of students through crafting strong essay openings, and I know how much a great first sentence can set the tone for your entire application.
The good news is there’s no single “right” way to start. The best openings feel authentic, match your natural voice, and draw the reader into your story. Here are a few strategies that work well:
1. Dive right into a specific moment. Skip the broad statements and drop the reader into an experience. For example: “My hands trembled the first time I tuned my grandfather’s broken radio.” This creates curiosity and makes readers want to know what happens next.
2. Use an unusual detail or image. Specific, sensory details help create intrigue. Example: “Red thread weaved between my fingertips as I tried to remember how my mother taught me to mend clothes.”
3. Pose a question that connects to your essay’s theme. If it’s intriguing and personal, it can hook the reader instantly. For example: “What would you do if you had to introduce yourself without using words?”
4. Start with a statement that reflects your perspective or personality. Something bold but genuine, like: “I believe in the power of awkward silences.”
What to avoid: openings that feel generic or overused, such as dictionary definitions, very famous quotes, or sweeping life mottos. If you do use a quote, make sure it’s personal — something said by someone in your life — and tie it directly into your story.
One trick I share with my students is to write the body of the essay first. Once you’ve nailed down your message, you can go back and choose an intro that naturally flows into the story. “Free-writing” a few different first paragraphs can also help you find the one that feels most like your voice.
And remember — your opening doesn’t have to be perfect right away. Many students discover their strongest first sentence after they’ve finished the rest of the draft. Admissions officers value honesty and personality, so let your introduction reflect the real you.
Over the past 8 years, I’ve helped thousands of students craft essays and applications that stand out at the most selective schools, including the Ivy League and Stanford. To give each student the highest level of attention, I keep my caseload small — booking early guarantees a place. I’m currently offering free consultations for new Sundial families where we’ll review your goals, brainstorm essay ideas, and outline a clear application strategy. You can book directly through my profile.
The good news is there’s no single “right” way to start. The best openings feel authentic, match your natural voice, and draw the reader into your story. Here are a few strategies that work well:
1. Dive right into a specific moment. Skip the broad statements and drop the reader into an experience. For example: “My hands trembled the first time I tuned my grandfather’s broken radio.” This creates curiosity and makes readers want to know what happens next.
2. Use an unusual detail or image. Specific, sensory details help create intrigue. Example: “Red thread weaved between my fingertips as I tried to remember how my mother taught me to mend clothes.”
3. Pose a question that connects to your essay’s theme. If it’s intriguing and personal, it can hook the reader instantly. For example: “What would you do if you had to introduce yourself without using words?”
4. Start with a statement that reflects your perspective or personality. Something bold but genuine, like: “I believe in the power of awkward silences.”
What to avoid: openings that feel generic or overused, such as dictionary definitions, very famous quotes, or sweeping life mottos. If you do use a quote, make sure it’s personal — something said by someone in your life — and tie it directly into your story.
One trick I share with my students is to write the body of the essay first. Once you’ve nailed down your message, you can go back and choose an intro that naturally flows into the story. “Free-writing” a few different first paragraphs can also help you find the one that feels most like your voice.
And remember — your opening doesn’t have to be perfect right away. Many students discover their strongest first sentence after they’ve finished the rest of the draft. Admissions officers value honesty and personality, so let your introduction reflect the real you.
Over the past 8 years, I’ve helped thousands of students craft essays and applications that stand out at the most selective schools, including the Ivy League and Stanford. To give each student the highest level of attention, I keep my caseload small — booking early guarantees a place. I’m currently offering free consultations for new Sundial families where we’ll review your goals, brainstorm essay ideas, and outline a clear application strategy. You can book directly through my profile.
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