Where can I find strong examples of college essay personal statements?
I'm starting to work on my main personal statement for college applications but I'm having a bit of writer's block. I think it would help me a lot if I could read some sample essays to see how others have structured theirs, especially since I want to make mine unique but also impactful.
Are there any legit websites or resources (preferably free) where I can find good examples? Also, if anyone has tips on what specifically to look for in examples, that would be super helpful. I'm a senior and feeling a little stressed about standing out with my essay since my stats are kind of average.
Are there any legit websites or resources (preferably free) where I can find good examples? Also, if anyone has tips on what specifically to look for in examples, that would be super helpful. I'm a senior and feeling a little stressed about standing out with my essay since my stats are kind of average.
6 months ago
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Lydia Schooler
• 6 months ago
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As a Yale graduate and college admissions advisor with over 8 years of experience helping students develop standout essays, I know how valuable it can be to read strong examples before you start writing your own. Seeing how other students structure their essays can spark ideas, reveal effective storytelling techniques, and help you find your own voice.
Some of the best free resources come directly from college admissions offices. Schools like Johns Hopkins and Tufts publish real essays from admitted students, often with commentary on what made them successful. Johns Hopkins’ “Essays That Worked” is especially useful, offering a curated collection paired with admissions officer notes on why each piece stands out.
The College Essay Guy website has hundreds of sample essays organized by theme and style, and Reddit’s r/ApplyingToCollege “A2C Wiki” includes real student essays along with opportunities to connect with others who share their work.
When reading samples, look for: voice that feels authentic, a structure that builds and resolves naturally, personal details that go beyond achievements, and moments that connect to a broader insight. For example, describing a small ritual—like fixing bikes with a grandparent—can reveal curiosity, problem-solving skills, and family bonds.
Use these examples for inspiration, not imitation. Even with average stats, a genuine and well-told story will stand out—because it’s yours.
Over the past 8 years, I’ve helped thousands of students craft essays and applications that stand out at the most selective schools. I’m currently offering free consultations for new Sundial families, where we can review your goals, brainstorm essay ideas, and outline a clear application strategy. You can book one directly through my profile—spots this month are limited.
Some of the best free resources come directly from college admissions offices. Schools like Johns Hopkins and Tufts publish real essays from admitted students, often with commentary on what made them successful. Johns Hopkins’ “Essays That Worked” is especially useful, offering a curated collection paired with admissions officer notes on why each piece stands out.
The College Essay Guy website has hundreds of sample essays organized by theme and style, and Reddit’s r/ApplyingToCollege “A2C Wiki” includes real student essays along with opportunities to connect with others who share their work.
When reading samples, look for: voice that feels authentic, a structure that builds and resolves naturally, personal details that go beyond achievements, and moments that connect to a broader insight. For example, describing a small ritual—like fixing bikes with a grandparent—can reveal curiosity, problem-solving skills, and family bonds.
Use these examples for inspiration, not imitation. Even with average stats, a genuine and well-told story will stand out—because it’s yours.
Over the past 8 years, I’ve helped thousands of students craft essays and applications that stand out at the most selective schools. I’m currently offering free consultations for new Sundial families, where we can review your goals, brainstorm essay ideas, and outline a clear application strategy. You can book one directly through my profile—spots this month are limited.
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