How do you write a strong conclusion for a college application essay?

I'm working on my Common App essay right now and I'm stuck trying to figure out how to end it. I know the conclusion is supposed to tie everything together, but for some reason, mine just feels weak or repetitive.

Is there a best way to approach the last paragraph? Should I try to go back to my opening idea, or just sum things up? I'm worried I'm not making enough of an impact at the end. Would love to hear how others are tackling their conclusions or if anyone has examples of what worked for them.
6 months ago
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Roger Lopez
 • 6 months ago
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A strong college application essay conclusion should do more than just summarize what you’ve already said—it needs to leave the reader with a lasting impression of who you are and why you would be a great addition to their campus. A common effective approach is to echo or reference your opening idea, creating a sense of cohesiveness and intentionality in your narrative.

Instead of simply restating your main points, try using the conclusion to show growth, insight, or a forward-looking perspective. For example, if you opened with an anecdote about your first debate tournament, consider circling back in the conclusion to show how your approach to challenges has evolved since then and how you’ll carry that mindset with you to college. This gives the essay a full-circle feel and reinforces your personal development.

Another technique is to end on a note of hope or ambition. Share how the story or realization you wrote about has prepared you for what comes next, whether that’s embracing a diverse college environment, tackling new challenges, or contributing to a specific community on campus. For instance, if your essay discussed overcoming anxiety about moving to a new country, your conclusion might express excitement to be someone who supports others in transition—a skill you gained from that experience.

Here’s a simple structure to try: 1) Reflect on what you’ve learned or how you’ve changed, 2) Connect that insight to your future goals, and 3) Leave the reader with a memorable closing line—something that encapsulates your personality or outlook.

A quick example: “Looking back, I realize that learning to code during those lonely afternoons didn’t just teach me about JavaScript—it taught me how to build something meaningful out of uncertainty. As I look forward to college, I’m eager to turn any blank page into a new project, a new friendship, or a new home.”

Ultimately, aim for a conclusion that feels genuine and specific to your story. It should remind the reader why your perspective matters and make your application stand out as memorable long after they finish reading.
Roger Lopez
Chicago, Illinois
Yale University BA, Political Science | Northwestern Kellogg School of Management, MBA Candidate |
Experience
4 years