How should I approach the Smith College supplemental essays?

I'm working on my application for Smith College and the essays are making me pretty nervous! I'm not sure what they're looking for and I want to make sure my responses stand out. Does anyone have advice or tips on what topics have worked well in the past?

I feel like my interests are kind of all over the place (I'm really into art and environmental science), so I'm struggling with how to connect these in a way that tells a cohesive story. Any specific do's or don'ts for Smith essays? If anyone got in, I'd really appreciate any examples or insights!
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Daniel Berkowitz
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Smith College's supplemental essay isn't complicated, but most applicants make it harder than it needs to be. The residential community prompt they're asking is designed to surface students who understand that college is about more than academics, it's about what you contribute to the people living next to you. Let's cut through the ambiguity and show you exactly how to approach this.

The Prompt

"What personal experiences, background or abilities would you bring to this residential environment to share with your neighbors and what would you hope your neighbors would share with you?"

Word limit: 200-250 words

That's it. No "why Smith" essay, no "intellectual curiosity" prompt. Just this. The simplicity is deceptive, most applicants respond with generic statements about "bringing a positive attitude" and "learning from diverse perspectives." Those essays say nothing. They could be written by anyone, about any school.

What Smith actually wants is specificity. They want to see that you understand their 41 residential houses where students from all four class years live together, share meals, and build community. They want evidence that you've thought about what it means to be a neighbor, not just a student who happens to live somewhere.

Start With a Vivid, First-Person Anecdote

Do not begin your essay by telling Smith what you'll bring. Begin by showing them who you are through a specific moment. The strongest openings place the reader directly into an experience that reveals your character.

Weak opening: "I would bring my passion for art and environmental science to share with my neighbors at Smith. I believe these interests could help others see the world differently."

Strong opening: "Last April, I spent six consecutive Saturdays photographing the same rotting log in the woods behind my house, documenting the fungi, insects, and moss that colonized it as spring arrived. My neighbor's kid asked why I was taking pictures of 'gross stuff.' I showed her the images on my camera. 'It's not gross,' she said after a minute. 'It's like a tiny city.'"

The second version accomplishes what the first cannot: it demonstrates your perspective rather than claiming it, shows your ability to share your interests with others, and reveals intellectual curiosity through action rather than assertion.

Structure Your Essay to Hit Both Parts of the Prompt

The prompt has two components, and many applicants neglect the second. You must address:

1. What you bring (your experiences, background, abilities)

2. What you hope neighbors share with you (what you want to learn)

The second part matters because Smith's Compass residential curriculum is built on mutual exchange. Their three learning goals, critical awareness, social responsibility, and engagement, all emphasize the two-way nature of community. An applicant who only talks about what they'll contribute comes across as someone who hasn't actually thought about community as reciprocal.

Consider: What questions do you have that you can't answer alone? What perspectives would deepen your understanding? Maybe you want to learn from students who've grown up in urban environments about how they conceptualize nature. Maybe you're curious about artistic traditions from cultures where the human-nature divide is understood differently than in Western frameworks.

Be Specific About Smith: Name Names

Smith has 27,000+ objects in their College Museum of Art, a collection larger than many major city museums. They have the Center for the Environment, Ecological Design, and Sustainability (CEEDS). They partner with NOAA for paid summer research fellowships. They're part of the Five College Consortium, giving you access to over 7,000 courses.

But more importantly for this essay, they have houses with distinct identities. Some focus on environmental themes. Some are in Gothic buildings; others are modern. Students eat meals in their houses, building community around shared tables.
If you've done research, and you should, mention something specific. Not to prove you visited the website, but to demonstrate that you've thought seriously about where you'd fit. "I'd love to live in a house where conversations about sustainability happen over dinner" is more compelling than "I want to meet people with different perspectives."

What Not to Do

Don't write about trauma. Smith's residential essay is about community contribution, not personal hardship. Sob stories about difficult backgrounds rarely demonstrate what value you'll add to your neighbors' lives.

Don't be vague about your interests. "I like art and the environment" means nothing. "I create digital collages from satellite imagery of deforestation patterns" tells the reader exactly who you are.

Don't ignore the word limit. At 200-250 words, every sentence must serve a purpose. If a sentence could appear in any applicant's essay, delete it.

Don't forget that Smith is a women's college, one where, as they put it, "women are the focus of all the attention and all the opportunities." You don't need to write explicitly about gender, but understand that Smith's community is built around empowering women to lead. If that's meaningful to you, it can be part of your answer.

Interdisciplinary Interests Tell a Story About Synthesis

If your interests seem "all over the place," you're probably looking at them wrong. The students who stand out at selective schools like Smith (roughly 21% acceptance rate) aren't necessarily the most accomplished, they're the ones whose applications tell clear, coherent stories.

Art and environmental science aren't disconnected interests; they're two ways of understanding human relationships to the natural world. One is analytical, the other is expressive. Together, they suggest someone who can both study problems and communicate them to broader audiences.

This is exactly what Smith values: students who will "address society's challenges" through the "power of the liberal arts." Environmental crises are, in part, communication problems, people don't act on data they can't connect to emotionally. An applicant who can bridge that gap through visual art isn't scattered; they're strategic.

Frame your essay around this synthesis. Don't apologize for having multiple interests. Show how they inform each other and what that combination uniquely enables you to contribute.

Programs Worth Knowing About

Smith has built infrastructure specifically for students with interdisciplinary interests:

Landscape Studies Program: The first such program at a liberal arts college in the United States, explicitly connecting art, environmental science, architecture, and ecology.

Arts Afield: A program at their MacLeish Field Station that formalizes art-making in environmental contexts.
Botanic Garden: Designed by Frederick Law Olmsted himself, functions as both ecological resource and artistic subject matter.
Smith College Museum of Art: One of the largest college art museums in the country with over 27,000 objects.

The Bottom Line

Smith's essay is about community, not credentials. They want neighbors, not just students. Start with a specific moment that reveals how you see the world, connect it to what you'd share and what you want to learn, and make clear you understand that Smith's residential system is central to their educational model, not an afterthought.

At a school where only one in five applicants gets admitted, generic essays about "bringing positivity" and "learning from diversity" are functionally invisible. Show Smith exactly who you are, and exactly why that person belongs in one of their houses.
Daniel Berkowitz
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