Where can I find good examples of successful college essays?

Reading sample essays can be really helpful for brainstorming and understanding what a strong college essay looks like, but there are a few things to keep in mind regarding where and how to find them.

A good starting point is the official admissions websites of certain universities. For example, Johns Hopkins University and Hamilton College both post 'essays that worked' from applicants they've admitted, along with commentary about what made the essays stand out. These essays often come with notes from admissions officers, giving you insight into why they were effective.

There are also popular college guidance books, such as '50 Successful Harvard Application Essays' or 'On Writing the College Application Essay' by Harry Bauld. These are frequently available at local libraries or bookstores. The essays in these books tend to be well-written, and the commentary included can help you understand what works and why.

Another place to find authentic student essays is through nonprofit organizations or forums where current college students share their application journeys. Sometimes, college prep websites host collections of 'real' essays, but make sure they are from reputable sources. Be cautious of random blogs or forums with 'sample essays,' since some can be outdated or not authentic.

When deciding which essays to read, it’s okay to look at examples from students who applied to a variety of schools, especially when looking for style and structure ideas. Schools generally look for strong storytelling, reflection, and authenticity, so you don’t need to restrict yourself to only those written for your target colleges. However, if you're looking at supplemental essays that are very specific to a school, it helps to focus on ones written for that prompt or university.

For your brainstorming, pay attention not just to the story being told but how deeply the writer reflects on their experiences and how their personality comes through.

As you read, jot down what stands out to you—tone, structure, or the unique perspective—and think about how you might bring those elements into your own work. And remember, the best essays sound like the real you, not a version of someone else’s story.

Good luck as you start brainstorming. Seeing a range of examples can definitely spark ideas, but your own voice and perspective are what will shine most in your application.