How do you write a strong college essay about yourself?

It's really normal to feel overwhelmed when you see a prompt that asks you to tell your story—especially since 'about yourself' feels so broad! What makes a college essay strong isn't a laundry list of achievements (which, as you mentioned, are already visible in your activities or transcript), but showing a slice of your personality, values, or perspective that isn't obvious elsewhere in your application.

You don't need a dramatic, life-changing story. Some of the best essays come from truly everyday moments—a funny family ritual, a favorite place to study, or even a 'failure' that changed the way you see things. The key is to zoom in on a specific experience or detail and use it to reveal something meaningful. Think of it like shining a spotlight on a single moment that says a lot about who you are.

For example, one student wrote about the ritual of making tea every evening with their grandmother, using the process as a metaphor for patience and connection across generations. Another student focused on their habit of fixing broken gadgets around the house, and tied it to their curiosity and persistence (plus some funny trial-and-error mishaps along the way). Both stories were simple, but vivid and honest—and that's what made them memorable.

If you’re stuck, try brainstorming moments when you’ve faced a small challenge, an unexpected reaction, or a moment that made you think differently. Did you ever stand up for something, or change your mind about an issue? Was there a time you made a mistake, and what did you learn from it? Even something as specific as your favorite weekly routine can be a window into your world.

Once you pick your moment, focus on showing, not just telling. Use dialogue, describe settings, or include your thoughts and feelings in the moment. Instead of saying “I am a problem-solver,” tell the story about the time you figured out how to help your sibling with homework or navigate a tricky group project at school.

Remember, admissions officers want to see how you think, what you care about, and how you might contribute to their campus. The most authentic voice always stands out, even if the topic isn’t flashy. So, pick something that matters to you and write honestly. Sharing your unique perspective is what makes your essay strong—not the ‘importance’ of the subject itself!