What are some effective strategies for writing a standout college essay?

I’m a Yale graduate and college admissions advisor with over 8 years of experience helping students gain admission to top universities like Harvard, Stanford, and MIT. I’ve guided thousands of students through the process of finding their voice and crafting essays that stand out, so I can share strategies that work without falling into clichés or sounding forced.

When you’re brainstorming, zoom in on a small moment or specific experience that reveals something meaningful about you — not your whole life story or only a dramatic event, but a slice of your personality, values, or growth. For example, instead of “I love music,” describe the Saturday you fixed a broken piano key and realized you love solving problems. Specific sensory details and actions help your voice come through.

Try jotting down three or four moments when you felt challenged, changed, or truly yourself. Once you have these, notice which ones naturally lend themselves to reflection. Reading a few sample essays can also spark ideas — the Common App website sometimes links to successful ones. Pay attention to how many start in the middle of a scene and use that moment to reveal deeper qualities. For instance, one student wrote about making pancakes at home and uncovered themes of family and initiative.

For organization, a simple outline helps keep you on track: begin with a hook (a vivid scene, surprising statement, or brief anecdote), explain its significance, then connect it to who you are today. Don’t be afraid to rewrite your opening after you’ve drafted the rest — sometimes the best hook comes last.

Before you finalize, share your essay with someone who knows you well and ask, “Does this sound like me?” Authenticity comes from specifics and honesty, not fancy vocabulary. If you’re worried about clichés, focus on moments only you could write about — quirks, perspectives, or details that someone close to you would instantly recognize as yours.

Give yourself permission to write a messy first draft. You might not see the standout angle right away, but often the process of writing is what helps you find it.

Over the past 8 years, I’ve helped thousands of students craft essays and applications that stand out at the most selective schools, including the Ivy League and Stanford. To give each student the highest level of attention, I keep my caseload small — booking early guarantees a place. I’m currently offering free consultations for new Sundial families where we’ll review your goals, brainstorm essay ideas, and outline a clear application strategy. You can book directly through my profile.

I know this process can feel overwhelming at times, but you are fully capable of navigating it successfully. I’m always here to help guide you through it.