Where can I find a good sample college essay for inspiration?
I'm starting to brainstorm for my Common App essay, but I'm struggling to figure out what a really strong essay should sound like. I feel like seeing an actual sample that worked for someone else would help me get a better sense of the tone, topic, and structure colleges are looking for.
Does anyone have links to websites with solid sample essays, or would you be willing to share your own (with personal info taken out, of course)? I'd appreciate any advice on what to focus on or avoid as well.
Does anyone have links to websites with solid sample essays, or would you be willing to share your own (with personal info taken out, of course)? I'd appreciate any advice on what to focus on or avoid as well.
6 months ago
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Roger Lopez
• 6 months ago
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Looking at sample essays can definitely help spark ideas and give you a feel for what makes a piece stand out. While I can't share someone else's essay directly, there are a few reputable places where you can find a variety of strong examples.
The official Common App website occasionally features sample essays, and university admissions sites (like Johns Hopkins, Tufts, or Connecticut College) often post essays from accepted students. These are usually vetted as strong examples, often with commentary about why they worked well. Seeing a real student's voice can help you get a sense of the tone—conversational but reflective, focused but personal.
When reading, notice how the best essays don't just tell what happened; they show how the experience shaped the writer. Pay attention to structure, too. Many effective essays start with an engaging anecdote, then reflect on its significance in the middle, and finish by connecting back to the opening or showing growth. Don't focus too much on trying to match someone else's story; use what you read as a springboard for your own voice.
Watch out for essays that focus on overused topics, like just describing an award or a big victory, unless you can bring a truly unique perspective. Admissions officers want to learn about your personality, insights, and genuine interests.
If you’re looking for a place to start, consider a quirky experience or a challenge that taught you something unexpected. Maybe it's a hobby that not many people know you have, or a small moment that changed your outlook. That can be just as compelling as any big accomplishment!
A final tip: after reading a few essays, step back and think what details from your life make you different. Use the samples for structure and tone, but let your experiences and voice guide the content.
The official Common App website occasionally features sample essays, and university admissions sites (like Johns Hopkins, Tufts, or Connecticut College) often post essays from accepted students. These are usually vetted as strong examples, often with commentary about why they worked well. Seeing a real student's voice can help you get a sense of the tone—conversational but reflective, focused but personal.
When reading, notice how the best essays don't just tell what happened; they show how the experience shaped the writer. Pay attention to structure, too. Many effective essays start with an engaging anecdote, then reflect on its significance in the middle, and finish by connecting back to the opening or showing growth. Don't focus too much on trying to match someone else's story; use what you read as a springboard for your own voice.
Watch out for essays that focus on overused topics, like just describing an award or a big victory, unless you can bring a truly unique perspective. Admissions officers want to learn about your personality, insights, and genuine interests.
If you’re looking for a place to start, consider a quirky experience or a challenge that taught you something unexpected. Maybe it's a hobby that not many people know you have, or a small moment that changed your outlook. That can be just as compelling as any big accomplishment!
A final tip: after reading a few essays, step back and think what details from your life make you different. Use the samples for structure and tone, but let your experiences and voice guide the content.
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Roger Lopez
Chicago, Illinois
Yale University BA, Political Science | Northwestern Kellogg School of Management, MBA Candidate |
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