What are some impressive college-level words to use in essays?
I've always heard that using higher-level vocabulary can help make your college application essays stand out, but I don't want to go overboard or sound unnatural. Are there any specific words or phrases that admissions officers appreciate (or really dislike) seeing?
I usually stick to familiar language, but I want my writing to sound more mature for my Common App essay. If anyone has examples of "college-level" words that worked for them, or suggestions on when and how to use them, I'd really appreciate it. I just don't want my essay to sound like I used a thesaurus for every word.
I usually stick to familiar language, but I want my writing to sound more mature for my Common App essay. If anyone has examples of "college-level" words that worked for them, or suggestions on when and how to use them, I'd really appreciate it. I just don't want my essay to sound like I used a thesaurus for every word.
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Roger Lopez
• 6 months ago
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Using sophisticated vocabulary can show your maturity as a writer, but what colleges appreciate the most is clear, authentic communication. Words that feel forced or out of place can actually hurt your essay. Admissions officers are looking for your authentic voice, so it's better to use sharp, precise language than to sprinkle big words just for the sake of it.
Some words and phrases can elevate your writing when used thoughtfully. For example, instead of saying "helped," you might use "facilitated" if you really enabled a process. Instead of "change," consider "transformed," "innovated," or "evolved" if appropriate. Strong descriptive verbs like "illuminated," "cultivated," "galvanized," or "augmented" can add maturity when they fit the context naturally. For transitions, phrases like "in retrospect," "consequently," "for instance," or "conversely" signal analytical thinking and help your essay flow.
Be cautious with overly complex or academic terms (like "ameliorate" or "juxtaposition") unless that's truly how you communicate. Admissions officers tend to dislike essays that sound more like vocabulary lists than personal stories. Words should serve your story, not distract from it. One practical approach: after writing a draft, identify areas where a single, precise word could replace a whole phrase (for instance: swap "really important to me" for "significant").
Here’s an example: Instead of “I learned a lot from volunteering,” you could say, “Volunteering at the local shelter was a transformative experience that cultivated my empathy and leadership.”
Ultimately, focus on clarity and specificity. A few well-chosen words that reflect your natural voice will be much more impressive than stringing together unfamiliar vocabulary. If you use a word, make sure you are confident in its meaning and that it fits smoothly in your sentence.
Some words and phrases can elevate your writing when used thoughtfully. For example, instead of saying "helped," you might use "facilitated" if you really enabled a process. Instead of "change," consider "transformed," "innovated," or "evolved" if appropriate. Strong descriptive verbs like "illuminated," "cultivated," "galvanized," or "augmented" can add maturity when they fit the context naturally. For transitions, phrases like "in retrospect," "consequently," "for instance," or "conversely" signal analytical thinking and help your essay flow.
Be cautious with overly complex or academic terms (like "ameliorate" or "juxtaposition") unless that's truly how you communicate. Admissions officers tend to dislike essays that sound more like vocabulary lists than personal stories. Words should serve your story, not distract from it. One practical approach: after writing a draft, identify areas where a single, precise word could replace a whole phrase (for instance: swap "really important to me" for "significant").
Here’s an example: Instead of “I learned a lot from volunteering,” you could say, “Volunteering at the local shelter was a transformative experience that cultivated my empathy and leadership.”
Ultimately, focus on clarity and specificity. A few well-chosen words that reflect your natural voice will be much more impressive than stringing together unfamiliar vocabulary. If you use a word, make sure you are confident in its meaning and that it fits smoothly in your sentence.
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Roger Lopez
Chicago, Illinois
Yale University BA, Political Science | Northwestern Kellogg School of Management, MBA Candidate |
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