How do I write a letter of continued interest for the University of Hawaii?
I was waitlisted at the University of Hawaii and want to show that I’m still very interested in attending. I’m trying to write a letter of continued interest, but I’m not sure what kind of update or tone is most appropriate for this school.
I want to keep it brief and make it sound genuine without repeating my whole application.
I want to keep it brief and make it sound genuine without repeating my whole application.
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Sundial Team
3 days ago
Keep it short, specific, and genuinely enthusiastic. For the University of Hawaii, a good letter of continued interest should clearly say that you would still be excited to enroll, give meaningful updates since you applied, and connect those updates to why UH remains a strong fit. The tone should be warm, respectful, and grounded rather than overly dramatic or overly formal.
A strong UH LOCI usually has four parts. First, thank the admissions office for continuing to consider your application and state directly that you remain very interested in attending. If UH is your top choice and you would enroll if admitted, say that plainly, but only if it is true.
Second, share concrete updates. Good updates include improved grades, new leadership roles, awards, finished projects, added community service, work experience, or a deeper commitment to an academic interest. Keep these updates factual and brief, and focus on things that strengthen your candidacy rather than listing every small achievement.
Third, explain why UH specifically still stands out to you. Mention a real reason tied to the university, such as a particular program, research area, campus environment, or community-based learning opportunity that matches your goals. This part matters because it shows interest in the school itself, not just in getting off a waitlist.
Finally, close politely by reaffirming your interest and thanking them for their time.
A simple structure could sound like this: thank you for considering my application, I remain very interested in the University of Hawaii; since submitting my application, I earned ___, completed ___, and took on ___; these experiences have strengthened my interest in studying ___ at UH because ___; thank you again for your continued consideration.
Avoid rewriting your personal statement, sounding desperate, or sending a vague note that only says you still want to attend. The best version is calm, specific, and updated.
A strong UH LOCI usually has four parts. First, thank the admissions office for continuing to consider your application and state directly that you remain very interested in attending. If UH is your top choice and you would enroll if admitted, say that plainly, but only if it is true.
Second, share concrete updates. Good updates include improved grades, new leadership roles, awards, finished projects, added community service, work experience, or a deeper commitment to an academic interest. Keep these updates factual and brief, and focus on things that strengthen your candidacy rather than listing every small achievement.
Third, explain why UH specifically still stands out to you. Mention a real reason tied to the university, such as a particular program, research area, campus environment, or community-based learning opportunity that matches your goals. This part matters because it shows interest in the school itself, not just in getting off a waitlist.
Finally, close politely by reaffirming your interest and thanking them for their time.
A simple structure could sound like this: thank you for considering my application, I remain very interested in the University of Hawaii; since submitting my application, I earned ___, completed ___, and took on ___; these experiences have strengthened my interest in studying ___ at UH because ___; thank you again for your continued consideration.
Avoid rewriting your personal statement, sounding desperate, or sending a vague note that only says you still want to attend. The best version is calm, specific, and updated.
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