Dr. Christopher Kilner
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4.9(75 reviews)
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Dr. Christopher Kilner
he/him/his
4.9(75 reviews)
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About
I am a Mitchell Scholar and a Goldwater Scholar. In my year, the Mitchell selected 12 of its 284 applicants, and 260 of 1,206 nominees became Goldwater Scholars. I hold a PhD in Ecology from Duke University and an MSc in Biodiversity and Conservation from Trinity College Dublin, and I live in London, where I work for an international organization leading in the climate technology space.

I have been advising students on their applications for eight years. Students I have worked with have been admitted to Harvard, Princeton, Columbia, Brown, Cornell, the University of Pennsylvania, Duke, Caltech, Carnegie Mellon, Johns Hopkins, Vanderbilt, Georgetown, Emory, UCLA, USC, and the University of Michigan, among others.

My Goldwater essay, which I wrote as an undergraduate at the University of Scranton, began with one of my ear tubes. Between the ages of two and fourteen, I had eight operations on my right ear, and the hearing in it went up and down between 15 and 75 percent of normal. I missed a lot of sports and spent much of that time reading.
London, UK
8 years of experience
English
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Trinity College Dublin – MS | Biodiversity and Conservation. George J. Mitchell Scholar
Duke University – PhD | Ecology. Research on how climate change alters forest and peatland ecosystems
How I work
When I do a full review, you get your draft back with comments in the margin and a written summary at the end. I look at the big things first, such as the topic and how well the essay answers the prompt, and then I go through it line by line. In the summary, I say what I would keep and which two or three changes I would start with. The suggestions are yours to take or leave. I do not rewrite the essay for you, and I cannot promise that it will get you in or win you an award.

Most of my students are applying to selective American colleges, although I also work with PhD and master's applicants and with students applying for scholarships and fellowships. I am most useful to STEM and pre-med students who have been told to sound more personal. Ecology is my own field, so if you are writing about it, or about climate or environmental science, I can comment on the science too.

Whatever you send, put the prompt at the top, along with any questions you have. Standard reviews take up to 48 hours, and if your deadline is sooner than that, I can turn a review around faster for an extra fee. I am glad to work with students in the UK and Europe who are applying to American colleges. Live sessions run from 5 to 10 pm UK time on weekdays (noon to 5 pm Eastern) and from 2 to 6 pm on weekends (9 am to 1 pm Eastern). If you are not sure which service you need, request a free consultation.
I’ve helped students get accepted to…
American University
Arizona State University
Boston College
Boston University
Brown University
California Institute of Technology
Carnegie Mellon University
College of William & Mary
Columbia University
Cornell University
Duke University
Emory University
Fordham University
George Washington University
Georgetown University
Georgia Institute of Technology
Harvard University
Indiana University Bloomington
Johns Hopkins University
Louisiana State University
Michigan State University
New York University
Princeton University
Trinity College Dublin
University of California, Los Angeles
University of Illinois at Urbana–Champaign
University of Maryland, College Park
University of Michigan
University of Pennsylvania
University of Pittsburgh
University of South Carolina
University of Southern California
University of Texas at Austin
Vanderbilt University
Villanova University
Wake Forest University
Services
Essay Review
Personal Statement
$35 + 20¢ per word
A full review of your Common App essay or any other main essay, at any stage.
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Essay Revision
$10 + 11¢ per word
For a new draft of an essay I have already reviewed. I go back through it to check your changes and mark anything still left to fix.
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Graduate & Fellowship Statement
$75 + 17¢ per word
Statements of purpose, research statements, and scholarship or fellowship essays. I comment on your research direction and your fit with the program or award, and I check whether your past work supports your plans. Tell me where you are applying.
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Supplemental Essay
$25 + 20¢ per word
A review of one school-specific essay. It should answer the school's question and tell them something your personal statement does not, and I will point out where it falls short.
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Supplement Set (one school)
$75 + 14¢ per word
I read all of your essays and short answers for one school side by side to find where they repeat each other. Once you have three or more, this usually costs less than reviewing them one at a time.
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Topic & Direction Check
$25 + 6¢ per word
Send me an idea or an outline, or a rough draft if you have one, and I will tell you which direction I would take. I do not make line edits on this one.
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UC PIQ Package
$70 + 13¢ per word
Put your four questions first in the document, then all four answers. I look for overlap between them and tell you if an answer does not fit the question you chose for it.
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Advising Sessions
60-Minute Strategy & Essay Session
$225 | 60 min
On Zoom, we can work on an essay, or go over your school list or graduate programs and plan the rest of your applications.
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30-Minute Deadline Check
$115 | 30 min
For one essay or one question, for example a topic you are unsure of, or where to start revising. If you want me to read your draft, send it a few hours before we meet.
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Advising Packages
Deadline Sprint
3 hours
Hours you can use on Zoom or for written reviews.
$600 ($200/hr)
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Final Stretch
5 hours
Time to finish a personal statement and the supplements for your top schools. We make a plan in the first session and spend the rest of the time on drafts.
$950 ($190/hr)
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Starter
10 hours
A school list and a first round of essays, or, later in the season, deferral or waitlist letters and interview practice.
$1,875 ($187.5/hr)
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Gold
15 hours
If you already have a school list, all of the hours can go to your essays and the other parts of the application.
$2,500 ($166.67/hr)
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Platinum
25 hours
For students who want my help through the whole process, including test preparation, the school list, essays, interviews, and choosing between offers.
$3,600 ($144/hr)
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Reviews
4.9
out of 5.0
Based on 75 reviews
Liam S
4
| 10 months ago
Duc N
5
| 11 months ago
Elena L
5
| Almost 2 years ago
Absolutely amazing feedback. Even before the deadline, it was returned quickly with thorough analysis and interesting opportunities to dive further into pieces of the essay, instead of just syntax errors, to make it an even better essay. Highly recommend!
Andreas J
5
| Almost 2 years ago
The feedback was incredibly thorough and insightful. He clearly understands how admission officers evaluate essays, especially those rooted in trauma like mine. The feedback covered nearly every aspect, and while I may not incorporate everything, it made it much easier to address the areas I felt were vague in my own text. I would definitely recommend him.
Vishnav R
5
| Almost 2 years ago