About
Sara Larner graduated cum laude from Columbia University's Barnard College, where she earned her Bachelors in English. Afterward, she went on to University of Southern California's School of Cinematic Arts, where she earned the Masters in Writing that makes her so perfectly suited to help you craft an exemplary essay.
Sara became a college counselor after discovering the unique satisfaction of helping her students get into their dream schools. She'd been tutoring for five years already, and a few of her students asked for help with their college essays. When the acceptances began rolling in, she knew that she wanted to provide this service to others.
Four years later, with a few thousand hours of experience, Sara is confident she can guide you through every step of this process, and teach you the techniques necessary to get into the school of your choice. In addition to her own Ivy League education, she's honed a results-focused method over the years that has helped students earn acceptances everywhere from Princeton to MIT. Sara has even helped some students earn likely letters from various Ivy's, including Yale. (For anyone unfamiliar: a likely letter is a letter elite schools send out to top-tier applicants prior to official admission. These are essentially wooing letters, requesting the student refrain from accepting other admission options and indicating that a generous financial package can be expected; each school sends out only a hundred or so every application cycle.) She also has a great deal of experience helping students gain admission to BS/MD programs and post-graduate schools, including medical and law school.
Sara will work with you to build a college list, draft essays, and then polish said essays until they demonstrate exactly why each particular school needs to admit you.
Sara became a college counselor after discovering the unique satisfaction of helping her students get into their dream schools. She'd been tutoring for five years already, and a few of her students asked for help with their college essays. When the acceptances began rolling in, she knew that she wanted to provide this service to others.
Four years later, with a few thousand hours of experience, Sara is confident she can guide you through every step of this process, and teach you the techniques necessary to get into the school of your choice. In addition to her own Ivy League education, she's honed a results-focused method over the years that has helped students earn acceptances everywhere from Princeton to MIT. Sara has even helped some students earn likely letters from various Ivy's, including Yale. (For anyone unfamiliar: a likely letter is a letter elite schools send out to top-tier applicants prior to official admission. These are essentially wooing letters, requesting the student refrain from accepting other admission options and indicating that a generous financial package can be expected; each school sends out only a hundred or so every application cycle.) She also has a great deal of experience helping students gain admission to BS/MD programs and post-graduate schools, including medical and law school.
Sara will work with you to build a college list, draft essays, and then polish said essays until they demonstrate exactly why each particular school needs to admit you.
Los Angeles, CA
8 years of experience
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Barnard College – BA | English with a double concentration in Film & Creative Writing, and a minor in Ancient Studies — at Barnard College of Columbia University
University of Southern California – MFA | Writing for the Screen and Television — at the School of Cinematic Arts of the University of Southern California
How I work
Nobody wants to read an essay; everybody wants to read a story.
This is a tested and true concept, and lies at the core of my approach to college advising. I am happy to help you build your lists, look through scholarships, and every other aspect of college advising—but the core of what I do is that I make sure your essay is something the college admissions officials won't be able to put down. When that reader goes before the admissions committee and argues your case, I want them to care. I want them to be invested. Frankly, they have to be. When an application is being considered, three things can happen. First and most rarely, a student with an exceptional application may get passed directly to the admission director—in which case that essay will still need to be emotionally compelling. Second and most commonly, those who clearly don't make the cut will be rejected by the first essay reader. But many students will fall in between, and the reader who likes your application will have to argue your case in front of the admissions committee.
I want you to be the student that reader truly wants to admit. The one they fight for. The one they care about.
In our sessions, my approach depends on what you want and where you are at in your applications. In broad strokes, if you are at the start of things, then I will begin by discussing your entire application. We'll go over grades, extracurriculars, test-scores. We'll build a list of reach, target, and safety schools, and I'll build a schedule to get everything done by the desired deadlines (be that ED, EA, or regular decision). We'll begin brainstorming for the common app, and set aside stories that are likely to come up in supplementals. Together we'll map out a story, and you will then go write it out. Afterward, I will edit it, leaving comments to explain every suggested change. We'll repeat this process until we have something that you are truly proud of.
I'm also available to help with scholarship applications.
Please see my packages below for more details. If no packages are visible, it is because I am fully booked.
This is a tested and true concept, and lies at the core of my approach to college advising. I am happy to help you build your lists, look through scholarships, and every other aspect of college advising—but the core of what I do is that I make sure your essay is something the college admissions officials won't be able to put down. When that reader goes before the admissions committee and argues your case, I want them to care. I want them to be invested. Frankly, they have to be. When an application is being considered, three things can happen. First and most rarely, a student with an exceptional application may get passed directly to the admission director—in which case that essay will still need to be emotionally compelling. Second and most commonly, those who clearly don't make the cut will be rejected by the first essay reader. But many students will fall in between, and the reader who likes your application will have to argue your case in front of the admissions committee.
I want you to be the student that reader truly wants to admit. The one they fight for. The one they care about.
In our sessions, my approach depends on what you want and where you are at in your applications. In broad strokes, if you are at the start of things, then I will begin by discussing your entire application. We'll go over grades, extracurriculars, test-scores. We'll build a list of reach, target, and safety schools, and I'll build a schedule to get everything done by the desired deadlines (be that ED, EA, or regular decision). We'll begin brainstorming for the common app, and set aside stories that are likely to come up in supplementals. Together we'll map out a story, and you will then go write it out. Afterward, I will edit it, leaving comments to explain every suggested change. We'll repeat this process until we have something that you are truly proud of.
I'm also available to help with scholarship applications.
Please see my packages below for more details. If no packages are visible, it is because I am fully booked.
I’ve helped students get accepted to…
Boston College
Boston University
Brandeis University
Brown University
Carnegie Mellon University
Duke University
Georgetown University
Georgia Institute of Technology
Howard University
Massachusetts Institute of Technology
Middlebury College
Princeton University
Swarthmore College
Temple University
University of California, Berkeley
University of California, Davis
University of California, Irvine
University of California, Los Angeles
University of California, San Diego
University of California, Santa Barbara
University of California, Santa Cruz
University of Michigan
University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill
University of Southern California
University of Texas at Austin
University of Virginia
University of Washington
Wake Forest University
Yale University
Services
Advising sessions
Admissions Counseling
$225 | 60 min
For families who need help on a pay-as-you-go basis—this is for you! If we've finished our half-hour consultation and you'd like to work with me but a package does not seem like an appropriate option, then I'm happy to work with you and your child one hour at a time. We'll review your child's admissions narrative and application strategy during our sessions, as well as going through and revising each essay in minute detail, together. Please send any materials you want me to read before our session at least 48-hours ahead of time.
This is a good option if my packages are fully booked, which tends to happen once the application season gets fully underway. If that is the case, this will be the only advising option on my page; no packages will be visible.
I look forward to working together and helping your child tell their story!
Book sessionEssay review
Activity List Review
$125
For students who'd like help with their activity list, this is for you! If needed, I will help you narrow down your list and get your descriptions down the required character count. BEFORE YOU PURCHASE, please contact me and I will send over a spreadsheet for you to fill out with your activities, since there is a lot of information with very specific limits and it can be challenging to get it all cleanly into a normal word document.
Submit essayChancing Add On (20% OFF)
$20
For students who received a chancing evaluation for two schools, and want to add more. This adds one school.
Please discuss this with me before you purchase it, so that there is no misunderstanding.
Submit essayChancing Evaluation
$50
My evaluation is not, by any means, a guarantee of admission. This is meant to help families who have their list mostly settled, but aren't sure if a few of the schools qualify as targets, reaches, or safeties. I am offering an evaluation of a student's odds at TWO SCHOOLS of their choice. Please discuss this with me before you purchase it, so that there is no misunderstanding.
I rank each school along the follow lines: Unrealistic (10% odds or less), Sharp Reach (10-15% odds), Reach (15-25% odds), Hard Target (25-40% odds), Target (40-65% odds), Safe Target (65-85%), Safety (85% and higher).
I complete my calculations using the most recent CDS data from each school in conjunction with a personalized evaluation of the student's transcript, resume/activity list, school profile, test scores, and essays. This is only available to students whose essays I have already reviewed, and even then you must provide me with the full information, otherwise I cannot provide you with an accurate evaluation. I will share a spreadsheet with the metrics I have used, so you can see for yourself why I have evaluated the student as I have.
If you want to add on additional schools, it is $20 per school (20% off). After the first evaluation, you may buy the "Evaluation Add On" package for this discount.
THIS DOES NOT INCLUDE A REVIEW OF ANY ESSAYS.
Submit essayEssay Bundle: 3 Supplementals
$50 + 15¢ per word
For students who'd like to get the Full Review for 3 SUPPLEMENTAL ESSAYS, this is for you! Please do not submit your personal statement essay here. This is for 3 short supplemental essays; normally that'd be a $75 base price, but I am happy to bundle them together for you with a $50 base price! You are welcome to submit as many bundles of 3 as you'd like.
Submit essayFOLLOW UP BUNDLE - 3 Essays
$40 + 12¢ per word
For return students who want me to take a second-pass look at bundle of THREE OR FEWER supplemental essays that I have ALREADY REVIEWED—this is for you! You'll get 20% off when submitting THE SAME THREE ESSAYS for a second round of feedback. Please do not try to submit essays that I have not yet provided feedback on. If you want a second review of a personal statement essay, see my other "FOLLOW UP" option.
Submit essayFOLLOW UP - Return Students
$20 + 12¢ per word
For return students who want me to take a second-pass look at an essay that I have ALREADY REVIEWED—this is for you! You'll get 20% off when submitting THE SAME ESSAY for a second round of feedback. Please do not try to submit an essay that I have not already provided feedback on. If you want to bundle supplementals for a second or third round, see my "FOLLOW UP BUNDLE" option.
Submit essayFull Review - Single Essay
$25 + 15¢ per word
For anyone and everyone with concerns about your personal statement or a single supplemental—this is for you! Whether you've just finished a first draft or you've polished until your eyes cross and need someone else to take a look, I will provide a full and complete breakdown of your essay's strengths, weaknesses, and what exactly you need to do next. This includes detailed line-notes, if possible (if an essay needs extensive structural changes, line notes are sometimes not productive).
Submit essayTopic Check
$15 + 14¢ per word
For students who have a few ideas or who simply aren't sure if their essay answers the prompt—this is for you! Feel free to submit partial or complete drafts, and I'll let you know if your essay works on a conceptual level. If it doesn't, I'll explain why and tell you what questions/concerns a college admissions officer is likely to have. I won't provide line notes, but after this you will qualify to submit a Follow Up Review if you'd like more help.
Submit essayUC Essays + Narrative Check
$80 + 15¢ per word
For students looking to have all their UC Personal Insight Question (PIQ) essays reviewed—this is for you! Submit all of your UC PIQ essays for a Full Review, and get a bonus review of how the essays work together as a whole!
Submit essayReviews
Jonah A
5
| 20 days ago
Sara is great at helping me express my true voice and desired message.
Jonah A
5
| 23 days ago
Very helpful and detailed feedback on my son's common app personal statement. We were uncertain as to its direction and if it was too edgy. Sara helped him get his essay back on track.
Tanmaya S
5
| 8 months ago
Excellent review, delivered on time. She provided thorough feedback, including well-crafted rephrasings of paragraphs. Among the many reviewers I've worked with, she's one of the best. Her attention to grammar is impeccable, and her insights are extremely detailed.
Julie (submitting on behalf of Breck) M
5
| 9 months ago
Sara was incredibly helpful. She reviewed my supplemental essays for two highly selective schools. Her edits and overall feedback provided the guidance I needed to improve the essays’ flow, reduce unnecessary words, and demonstrate my fit. I appreciated her style, too, which was encouraging while also being genuine about what admissions counselors will be looking for. I was accepted EA at MIT (I won't hear from the other school until RD)--I'd say it was a success! Thank you for being easy to work with and for making my essays stronger. Our family will use Sara's services again.
Eesha G
5
| 11 months ago
Fun facts
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Hobbies
Writing, reading, painting, and cooking — in about that order ^_^
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Favorite author
Terry Pratchett, Mary Doria Russel, and Ray Bradbury all tie (though if we are allowing playwrites then add on Euripides and Shakespeare)
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First job
Wildlife Keeper